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Vacuum Cleaner

Red furry vacuum silently goes across the floor
Consuming dropped homemade southern biscuit
Then looks up with sad eyes beggin'  for more
  

Just for fun!!

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Robin Davis

June 16, 2014 at 9:02 AM

Sara This is fun and silly. A vacuum cleaner that gives puppy dog eyes for scraps. LOL Thank you for the nice comment on my Block Party poem.

Kathryn Collins

January 19, 2013 at 10:15 AM

like it Sara. My vacuum is being starved in the closet. love, Kathy

Debbie Duncan

January 16, 2013 at 8:48 PM

cute ;} have a great day Sara,,,your name always reminds me of "Sera's Smile by Hall n Oats,,, you can watch it on utube ;}

Vesna Kovrlija

January 15, 2013 at 3:27 AM

Very sweet and original!

Robert Pettit

January 14, 2013 at 4:08 PM

I know people who would act the same way if a delicious biscuit fell on the floor. Good three lines.

Russell Sivey

January 14, 2013 at 3:17 PM

Ha ha, this is quite the humorous write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!