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Vacuum Cleaner

Red furry vacuum silently goes across the floor Consuming dropped homemade southern biscuit Then looks up with sad eyes beggin' for more Just for fun!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/16/2014 9:02:00 AM
Sara This is fun and silly. A vacuum cleaner that gives puppy dog eyes for scraps. LOL Thank you for the nice comment on my Block Party poem.
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Date: 1/19/2013 10:15:00 AM
like it Sara. My vacuum is being starved in the closet. love, Kathy
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Date: 1/16/2013 8:48:00 PM
cute ;} have a great day Sara,,,your name always reminds me of "Sera's Smile by Hall n Oats,,, you can watch it on utube ;}
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Date: 1/15/2013 3:27:00 AM
Very sweet and original!
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Date: 1/14/2013 4:08:00 PM
I know people who would act the same way if a delicious biscuit fell on the floor. Good three lines.
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Date: 1/14/2013 3:17:00 PM
Ha ha, this is quite the humorous write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/14/2013 2:47:00 PM
i like it! great comparison...
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Date: 1/14/2013 2:36:00 PM
hmmm, to me, I am thinking you are describing a pet dog?? Hope I guessed right! very cute idea.
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Date: 1/14/2013 1:32:00 PM
Sara, what a cute post. I have 2 such vacuums.. They can stare a hole thru you... hehehe.......l Jake
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Date: 1/14/2013 12:39:00 PM
How adorable! Lovely write, Sara. Must drop more of those southern biscuits! ;)
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Date: 1/14/2013 11:49:00 AM
hehehehehe...i could picture that sad looking vacuum cleaner...power of ur words...:)))
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:50:00 AM
Well, it was fun, Sara! Terry (Unfortunately, mine gets 'fed up' pretty quickly...)
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:43:00 AM
Brought a chuckle and a big smile...what a fun write !!
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:42:00 AM
Yes......sad eyes... but cute, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/14/2013 10:16:00 AM
lol, a sad little Princess : ) l had a chuckle here
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