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Vacation

Where black-necked cranes come to chat with me In the company of wine and deep brown honey Flowing from apple twigs in the heavenly valley Of Bumthang , carved into the sublime Himalayas By glacial melt and monsoon rains in collaboration Giving rise to lovely landscapes offering relaxation In Buddha’s silence, there lies my dream destination To fill some vacuum in a week of my next vacation In the north east of the Indian subcontinent where Beautiful girls and Buddhist monks are very sincere (Bum refers to girls and thang a flat piece of land) Everywhere you will see Buddha’s lifted hand In consonance with the land an ever demure voice Of Buddhism says: go to the mystic blue and rejoice Along the murmur of icy rivers and lakes everywhere Pink rhododendrons exude fragrance in the fresh air Flowers red, yellow, pink, white, lilac, green and blue For our sore minds and thirsty psyche all these hues In the shades of Pine and Oak monasteries as a nest The imposing peaks descend here to take a little rest Four charming valleys, Tang, Ura, Choekhor, Chumey Will greet us in a smile on our trip to Bumthang valley Morning is wakened here by blue-capped rock thrush Beside the flapping flags the gurgling streamlets gush Where Gross National Happiness instead of GDP Determines economic progress of the society Come, dear friend, to join me in the amazing journey From the chains of self to a deep sense of infinity _________________________________________________ February 13, 2016

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Date: 8/10/2017 4:14:00 PM
Great visual expressions with dialog.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:05:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Probir...
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thanks for the kind, thanks
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:37:00 PM
Probir,, Congratulations on your awesome "Vacation WIN!" LINDA
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2016 10:21:00 PM
The congrats are welcome LINDA..... , n thank you...
Date: 2/20/2016 9:26:00 PM
Probir, you have painted a beautiful picture a place I always wanted to go. Congratulations on your win!!!!
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:23:00 PM
I am glad to learn. Thank you Eve...
Date: 2/20/2016 3:13:00 PM
Vacations varied/ vacations great all who won are on the winners’ page..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:26:00 PM
Well said. Thank you.
Date: 2/20/2016 10:50:00 AM
Probir, congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles*-luloo
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 2/20/2016 10:10:00 AM
Congrats Probir, on you win well written xxx Wendy
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Wendy.
Date: 2/20/2016 8:43:00 AM
Very nicely done, Probir. A vivid work of the senses..I enjoyed this read. I have yet to experience India and its offerings, but I hope to someday follow in the footsteps of a delightful description such as yours. Congratulations on your win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Sam.....India is a country of unbelievable diversity.
Date: 2/20/2016 6:48:00 AM
Wonderful piece of art, Sir. I am too from Kolkata and visited Darjeeling and most part of Sikkim. So, written about Pelling for this contest. Next vacation would be Bhutan, for sure. Warm regards, Bobby
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:01:00 AM
Dhonyobad Bobby.Valo laglo.... I.e. Thank you Bobby, I like your comment.
Date: 2/20/2016 5:56:00 AM
Probir, Congratulations on the wonderful poem you submitted for this contest. It was completely graceful, beginning with the black-necked cranes who graced you with a chat. Thank you for your entry.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2016 6:42:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/14/2016 10:13:00 PM
Such beautiful descriptions of you native land! So well written with gentle phrasing and clever rhyming. BRAVO Probir! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/15/2016 4:21:00 AM
Thank you. But I am from Kolkata, in India, yet to visit Bumthang in the state of Bhutan bordered to north by China, and the rest three directions by India.Bumthang is popularly called second Switzerland. I shall be visiting next may. I am glad that you liked my poem.

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