Vacation

Where black-necked cranes come to chat with me
In the company of wine and deep brown honey
Flowing from apple twigs in the heavenly valley
Of Bumthang , carved into the sublime Himalayas
By glacial melt and monsoon rains in collaboration
Giving rise to lovely landscapes offering relaxation
In Buddha’s silence, there lies my dream destination
To fill some vacuum in a week of my next vacation

In the north east of the Indian subcontinent where
Beautiful girls and Buddhist monks are very sincere
(Bum refers to girls and thang a flat piece of land)
Everywhere you will see Buddha’s lifted hand
In consonance with the land an ever demure voice
Of Buddhism says: go to the mystic blue and rejoice

Along the murmur of icy rivers and lakes everywhere
Pink rhododendrons exude fragrance in the fresh air
Flowers red, yellow, pink, white, lilac, green and blue
For our sore minds and thirsty psyche all these hues

In the shades of Pine and Oak monasteries as a nest
The imposing peaks descend here to take a little rest
Four charming valleys, Tang, Ura, Choekhor, Chumey 
Will greet us in a smile on our trip to Bumthang valley
Morning is wakened here by blue-capped rock thrush
Beside the flapping flags the gurgling streamlets gush

Where Gross National Happiness instead of GDP
Determines economic progress of the society   
Come, dear friend, to join me in the amazing journey
From the chains of self to a deep sense of infinity 
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February 13, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Williams Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:14 PM
Great visual expressions with dialog.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Probir...
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Thanks for the kind, thanks
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Probir,, Congratulations on your awesome "Vacation WIN!" LINDA
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:21 PM
The congrats are welcome LINDA..... , n thank you...
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Probir, you have painted a beautiful picture a place I always wanted to go. Congratulations on your win!!!!
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:23 PM
I am glad to learn. Thank you Eve...
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Vacations varied/ vacations great all who won are on the winners’ page..Congrats..Sara
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Well said. Thank you.
Scars Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Probir, congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles*-luloo
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Laura.
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February 20, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Congrats Probir, on you win well written xxx Wendy
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Thank you Wendy.
Jameson Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Very nicely done, Probir. A vivid work of the senses..I enjoyed this read. I have yet to experience India and its offerings, but I hope to someday follow in the footsteps of a delightful description such as yours. Congratulations on your win.
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Sam.....India is a country of unbelievable diversity.
Tagore Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Wonderful piece of art, Sir. I am too from Kolkata and visited Darjeeling and most part of Sikkim. So, written about Pelling for this contest. Next vacation would be Bhutan, for sure. Warm regards, Bobby
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Dhonyobad Bobby.Valo laglo.... I.e. Thank you Bobby, I like your comment.
Lane Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Probir, Congratulations on the wonderful poem you submitted for this contest. It was completely graceful, beginning with the black-necked cranes who graced you with a chat. Thank you for your entry.
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 6:42 AM
Thank you.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:13 PM
Such beautiful descriptions of you native land! So well written with gentle phrasing and clever rhyming. BRAVO Probir! Best wishes, Keith
Gupta Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Thank you. But I am from Kolkata, in India, yet to visit Bumthang in the state of Bhutan bordered to north by China, and the rest three directions by India.Bumthang is popularly called second Switzerland. I shall be visiting next may. I am glad that you liked my poem.
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