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Vacant Lot

. in a nettled field riddled with foxtail that pricks the sun a Popsicle wrapper clings to a thistle in sweet surrender remembering the yesterdays of bare feet and blue jeans

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Alan Reed

Date: 6/12/2010 10:03:00 PM

sharp inanimate objects conjer up the days when we could care less if we were barbed by nature. It was all part of the fun. Living on the edge in a certyain way.

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/10/2010 5:58:00 AM

Ah, a sweet Sijo, Carrie...Congratulations on your win in the contest. I especially love the last line, as it relates to some of my favorite things, even today...I love going barefeet. Love, Audrey

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/9/2010 9:04:00 AM

congrats on your win Carrie..this is a sweet piece...BG

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/9/2010 9:03:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts embraced in this Sijo! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/9/2010 8:05:00 AM

Hi Carrie :)--I really enjoyed this one, it has so much imagery in 3 lines ) congrats on your win! --nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2010 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in the "Sijo" contest by Rick Parise. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2010 7:42:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Sijo contest with this great entry.. enjoy another well earned win.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/8/2010 7:27:00 PM

Great job, Carrie. I like this one and you got the job done in the turnaround surprise last line. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/6/2010 5:53:00 AM

Sweet memories of childhood, Carrie! And thank you for your kind comments. Wish you good luck in the contest and have a nice Sunday!...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 11:21:00 AM

Ahhh, mixing nature with childhood memories. A very good way to approach this contest, Carrie. I really like the descriptiveness of the field, how it evokes that image of happy carefre days. Luv, andrea

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2010 5:00:00 AM

Just wonderful, so many times i have past shrubberry and noticed a sweetie paper rasping away as the winds caresses it. Good luck in Rick's contest >> James

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2010 12:58:00 PM

good luck in this contest as well. Nice on the memory, enjoyed,..p.d.