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This was written while working on an oil Rig. Tempestuous seas built up and blustery winds buffetted at the vessel, while inside all was warm and tranquil. Evening turned to night and the creaking of the moving vessel was evident and lent itself, within my mind, to the rythm and flow of Verdi's Slave chorus from his opera, "Nabuccho". It is not, of course... I stole the first words of the first line.... for my thoughts DID wander....  

Va Pensieri My solitude, which I prefer Does not, like some, plunge to despair But rather it does stimulate My mind for thoughts to create. Inside my room, alone again For all the sounds does my ear strain: The muffled purr from the a/c The creaking bulkheads all round me. Outside I watch a billowing cloud Grow quietly dark as night does shroud The blues and greens of the sea And whitecaps dancing angrily. In the chill cold night we roll and swell Piched up and down and aside as well. Like that cork in a bath we are tossed about The waves slap our bows and, as though in a shout Wakens us from our reverie To let us know that we are still at sea. To remind us too that we should bemoan The fact that we're hers and hers alone. But let the gulls skim the waves and the fish keep the sea For it's among the clouds where my heart wants to be. Away to the South and away from here Away to those parts which my heart holds so dear. Soft music plays alongside my ear No staccato bursts, but slow and clear. And as it soothes me to very soul My mind and heart reach their goal. No need for words from any other For words right now, my peace would smother. In this tranquil mood I write Just as day dies and I say goodnight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/30/2016 5:30:00 PM
Thomas,, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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Date: 1/31/2016 2:10:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thanks for stopping by and for your kind words. I feel a bit like this poem lately as I have been wandering and buffeting around, without any purpose as such - and not writing (or visiting poetry soup) - as I would love to. I SHOULD really make the effort. The administrators and all you lovely contributors do. Thank you once again. :)

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