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V Day

V DAY Cupid, God of immortal love, The sharpest arrows for me Prepare Thy archery, on my aching heart To practice, Be accurate, I THEE, Implore For I will die at once If Thou MISS The TARGET! ©Demetrios Trifiatis 14 February 2013

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/23/2013 10:54:00 PM

nice one ;} thank you for reading I call her name ;}

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/15/2013 4:46:00 PM

powerful poem is this,,

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 2/15/2013 9:40:00 AM

May Cupids aim be straight and true and find its way to you! Love This! Thank you for kind comments! Lori

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2013 11:44:00 PM

So clever, V day indeed!!! Cute!

David Williams

Date: 2/14/2013 4:34:00 PM

Demetrios well said,....David

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/14/2013 11:49:00 AM

I like this, but I know that Cupid won't miss. You are safe. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/14/2013 12:02:00 PM

If He misses I will Die, but since you are certain He won't then here I hope to be next year! Happy V D. Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2013 10:56:00 AM

Yes the day is yours ..... <3 <3 <3 - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Opondi Ougo

Date: 2/14/2013 4:15:00 AM

Deep and timely piece..Sir..The V-Day just begun :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/14/2013 4:57:00 AM

Thank you so much!