Uvalde Premiere Contest Winner

A dark shadow wraps the earth,
springs of tears spring up in the saddened hearts,
never-ending rains of hurt and pain,
the sun fades,
the stars lost their light,
so many questions unanswered,
mourning songs echo the suffering souls,
the silence cries out,
the scream is silent,
parents weep for their children
"refusing to be comforted,
because they are no more",
the angels are sad,
God is crying,
way too early, white roses bloom in heaven,
way, way too early.

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Date: 6/14/2022 4:25:00 PM
A very emotional writing. Congratulations!
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Marius Alexandru
Date: 6/16/2022 1:42:00 PM
thank you very much
Date: 6/13/2022 9:37:00 AM
Maurius, CONGRATULATIONS on your top win with this descriptive, moving piece! Janice
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Marius Alexandru
Date: 6/13/2022 7:48:00 PM
thank you very much, Janice
Date: 6/13/2022 8:01:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this sad reality in your poetic style. God bless you.
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Marius Alexandru
Date: 6/13/2022 8:20:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 6/13/2022 7:41:00 AM
Excellent writing. Congrats on your winning entry in Brian's contest with this brilliant write. God bless you. love, Gina
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Marius Alexandru
Date: 6/13/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thank you very much. Blessings to you too.
Date: 6/13/2022 4:13:00 AM
When will there be peace on Earth? Every word of your magnificent poem, touched my heart. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, Marius.
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Marius Alexandru
Date: 6/13/2022 8:26:00 AM
Thank you. :(
Date: 6/8/2022 12:46:00 PM
Oh my, yes, Marius. Thank you so much for important poem, as Plabi says, "a heart-wrenching one."
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Marius Alexandru
Date: 6/8/2022 5:09:00 PM
Thank you very much
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Plabi Pradhan
Date: 6/8/2022 1:49:00 PM
Yes, I felt that L Milton Hankins.
Date: 6/8/2022 12:42:00 PM
A heart wrenching one.
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Marius Alexandru
Date: 6/8/2022 5:09:00 PM
Thank you
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