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Utter Tranquility

the big lone boulder knows utter tranquility with each waking dawn For Raul Moreno's Awaiting Dawn Contest

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Date: 9/13/2016 5:32:00 AM
I loved your Haiku, Andrea. You are very dextrous in this genre too !
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Date: 5/16/2015 12:50:00 PM
by the way, your old haiku are different than the ones you write and post now.
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Date: 5/16/2015 12:49:00 PM
You write so beautiful Andrea, I am glad I took my time to enjoy all your haiku. I might write a poem today. So please check out my new poem later tonight. "I never promised you a haiku." Don't be surprised if I come back to read a few of the ones I comment already. I got a sweet poem just for you. I'm studying your haiku. I will leave and extra smiles, on the ones I like the most. SKAT
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Date: 1/18/2011 10:50:00 AM
beautifully you have drawn the image of the boulder waiting for the dawn-kashinath
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:29:00 AM
Yes for sure it does, Andrea! If these boulders could tell stories!!! Great Haiku..Hope you are having a nice Easter and thank you for your kind comments..Love, Gert
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Date: 3/18/2010 2:42:00 AM
This is a very interesting haiku. The rock has so much meaning and so many benefits to man...minerals, various chemicals, etc. I painted a vaguely familiar rock once...in the woodlands. Link to see=> http://daneann.redbubble.com/sets/74181/works/3306727-2-woodland-scene <= Smiles. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/5/2010 9:27:00 PM
Reminds me of Gary Snyder's poetry. Have you ever read him? I have tapes of him and many other poets. I often listen to them before going to sleep. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:31:00 PM
As only a big lone boulder can.... ;-) Nice one, Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2010 11:08:00 AM
Beautifully written, I love the concept of a boulder waiting, lol. Well done. KIndest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:54:00 PM
Well, congratulations to a gal who thinks she is not good at haiku. I hope this changes your mind Andrea. Wonderful haiku! Love, Connie
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:37:00 AM
Very nice take on the picture in Raul's contest Andrea >> James
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Date: 2/26/2010 2:21:00 PM
smile....big? sounds like a cowboy boulder..you're making me grin! Nope I had NO idea Unrequited was Iambic????
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:28:00 PM
Good write here. The visual is sticking with me on this one. David
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Date: 2/21/2010 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on placeing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:18:00 AM
enjoyed reading today, thanks for the comments.
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Date: 2/21/2010 8:36:00 AM
A gracious contribution to Raul's contest, I took a look at this one. I kept thinking of iron ore mountion's reflection in the spring, of life giving srubs. Smile. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:17:00 AM
super glad that you're trying your hand at haiku (& winning too, yay!) congrats on your win with this impressive take on Raul's photo Andrea:)
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Date: 2/21/2010 4:37:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation Andrea, Congratulations. Déirdre
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Date: 2/20/2010 9:38:00 PM
On the bottom of your tag poem write who u are tagging.. then go to their list of poems and just choose one of their poems to tell them u tagged them for the Poetry in Motion game on Soup.. Dane Ann is the Queen of PIM and she will luv to be tagged... luv..
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Date: 2/20/2010 7:59:00 PM
Way to go my friend with this terrific winning Haiku .. many congrats on your well deserved win... a joy to read with a title to compliment ... enjoy your victory BBF..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/20/2010 7:04:00 PM
This is sure to place very strongly Drea nicely done =) I do so enjoy reading the works of the many talented poets assembled here it inspires me deeply, thank you very much Also to respond to your query on the Breakfast poem I have to say yes my ex girlfriend really did get to me but if theres no depth to the passion or if restrains are imposed on ones love then is it really worth an investment. It's been over and done for the past six months, but a past love lives in the abscense of a present.
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:31:00 PM
sounds like a super short song to me, in a way(: congrats to you, you did a great job. and i think i have seen your blog, but i'll go see soon.if i havn't! -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this. It is lovely. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on you beautiful haiku, dear Andrea. Thank you for your comments. Love, Iolanda
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