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Neared mayhem can follow. Choices brought with sorrow. Restoring us from graft. We appear shaping past. We yearn most than we say. Our minds and hearts will pay. Running and squealed to rife. Everything spins with life. Morning sun warms the face. Winning or yield reap grace. Out of place wish to aim. Life's pages dwell a game. Daily tweaking our tale, We must at once prevail.  We cling to each other.  Meeting needs and utter. Dream of giving up hope.  Always upset by mope. Life will remain unjust. Don't forfeit our spirits.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/15/2021 5:31:00 PM
Never give up hope, though life may become unfair ! Great advice Lasaad !
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Date: 12/15/2021 10:03:00 AM
Those first two lines say much!
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Date: 12/15/2021 4:36:00 AM
Good to read about your analytical thoughts and advice, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/15/2021 1:25:00 AM
You chose a difficult form. I have never tried it. But you did well.
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Date: 12/14/2021 4:13:00 PM
Tough form to master Lasaad, you've done well with this one. Bill
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