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Uss Harry S. Truman

Aboard Harry S Truman, CVN 75
Monumental battle ship, 
Within her hull, she seemed alive

Floating city, hauling a deadly airstrip
Creating peace, in the middle East, with the fatal Tomcat
Crew headed for a six month defensive trip

American flag flown, in every sea, ready for combat
Internal soul is her combined crew
Carrying out orders, no rest-weary, ready for attack

Prowlers, Hornets, Tom's we flew
Dark sky, blazes on land
that was when we knew, rumors were true

God on our side, holding our hand
Mission carried out, haven't lost a man.

A. Green
First try at Terza Rima

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/31/2010 9:16:00 AM
Great write and wondrerful expression! If this is from experience, please accept my thanks for having served...Have a great holiday. Regards, Dan C
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:03:00 PM
Please put it in the contest..its a great write..luv..
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:02:00 PM
Tremendous Amy and good luck in Catie's contest with this historical account... cannot remember the title of my entry but its the only Terza Rima on my list for sure... good luck girl... luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/22/2010 9:40:00 AM
Excellent try and your write is interesting. It carries a feeling of pride and yet also chilling. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 5/21/2010 11:44:00 AM
Definitely not going in the contest...
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