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Useless

paper airplanes – like origami frogs I’ve made - useless in design the frogs would hop mere inches the planes soared for mere seconds Aug. 26, 2022 for the Paper Airplanes Poetry Contest of John Lawless

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Terry Miller

Date: 9/19/2022 1:41:00 AM

A big congratulations to a fine tanka full of meanings.

John Lawless

Date: 9/15/2022 6:36:00 AM

useless.....and yet we all dream. Very interesting take on the theme Andrea. Thanks for participating in the contest

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/15/2022 1:13:00 PM

wow I am so stoked, I did not even know I made the winner list.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/2/2022 3:16:00 PM

Interesting direction for the contest poem. I've never made a paper frog jump. lol Fun read, good luck my sweet friend. Bill

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/30/2022 10:10:00 AM

haha Andrea. If at first you don't succeed...LOL Linda

Weston Gregory

Date: 8/27/2022 4:39:00 PM

hop a tot or skyward shorter than a breath, never meant to last, you take what you get. nevertheless a burst of joy surge through yet. Andrea it's what I immediately felt. Congrats