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paper airplanes – like origami frogs I’ve made - useless in design the frogs would hop mere inches the planes soared for mere seconds Aug. 26, 2022 for the Paper Airplanes Poetry Contest of John Lawless

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Date: 9/19/2022 1:41:00 AM
A big congratulations to a fine tanka full of meanings.
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Date: 9/15/2022 6:36:00 AM
useless.....and yet we all dream. Very interesting take on the theme Andrea. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/15/2022 1:13:00 PM
wow I am so stoked, I did not even know I made the winner list.
Date: 9/2/2022 3:16:00 PM
Interesting direction for the contest poem. I've never made a paper frog jump. lol Fun read, good luck my sweet friend. Bill
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Date: 8/30/2022 10:10:00 AM
haha Andrea. If at first you don't succeed...LOL Linda
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Date: 8/27/2022 4:39:00 PM
hop a tot or skyward shorter than a breath, never meant to last, you take what you get. nevertheless a burst of joy surge through yet. Andrea it's what I immediately felt. Congrats
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:47:00 AM
Not easy to construct an origami. And too small for a machine :)
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Date: 8/27/2022 3:42:00 AM
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Robert Warlov
Date: 8/27/2022 10:10:00 AM
*****
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/27/2022 6:31:00 AM
Thanks. You got my hidden meaning.
Date: 8/26/2022 10:41:00 PM
Love your theme Andrea. Very clever in thought and a wonderful entry for the contest. Blessings your way...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/27/2022 6:32:00 AM
Thank you

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