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Us - You and Me

We breathe into our worlds a hint of angst afloat upon a scented kiss of thanks. We see the world through jaundiced, seeking eyes betrayed by canyon wrinkles cloudy skies. We hear soft gentle moan of whispering Elm share secrets only rooted stoics tell. We touch moments eternal as we scroll past paths of everlasting that we stole. We taste sweet succulence of joy’s desire, harsh bitterness of livings endless fire. We are the edge of life’s unending shoal our eyes the windows of a stained glass soul. ©4/17/2018 submitted to – NEW POEMS ONLY – 2 Poetry Contest sponsor – Emile Pinet

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Date: 5/3/2018 9:03:00 AM
I especially like the last 3 lines, 'our eyes the windows of a stained glass soul', John. Nicely described and written poem about friendship. Congrats! All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 5/3/2018 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written beautiful description of friendship.
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:09:00 PM
So lovely, John--CONGRATS!! Janice
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:34:00 PM
Congrats, John, on your podium finish.
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations John! Your amazing poem has placed Third in my contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 4/19/2018 11:37:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading your poem.Have a great day! :)
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