Urinalysis

How old age and senile relate
Depends on cycling the flood gate
Forget zipper down?
Always leave it uptown?
Each a unique cognitive state
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December 21, 2018 at 12:28 AM
We live our cycle of life and then we go, so all four seasons of our life, we must enjoy to the fullest, as seasons seem to come and go so fast, I love life and have had my fair share of illnesses but when He is ready he will call us. Best wishes, Jennifer.
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December 21, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Thanks Jennifer, you are absolutely right, Enjoy every day, since we never know when the party will end. Your poetry is unique, and I am glad you are here!!
Hay Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 5:21 AM
I like your style Duke, you certainly do make me laugh!! warm regards, Laura.
Beaufort Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 6:52 AM
Thanks Laura, I was looking around at some of may old work and see I never responded to you (apologies). I'll take a look at your work and comment. We do need to laugh sometimes!!
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Duke, this is F U N N Y and I am loving it 7 ~
Beaufort Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 3:44 PM
It is the greatest pleasure for me to see that you can smile and laugh. You are a saint on this earth.
Breidenthal Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:54 PM
Love that clever last line. Another goood one ^^ Always, Laura
Beaufort Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:15 PM
CAIO!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Cool pee pee limerick! heehee
Beaufort Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Yes, and what happens to us when we get up in years. I hope to be in the old age state as long as possible, but I find I am more forgetful these days.
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January 20, 2016 at 12:15 PM
unique indeed Duke, thank you for the read -*Luv Linda*
Beaufort Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Ah, your visit means a lot to me, and you are very welcome. I just read a few of your poems, and you are writing about matters of passion and hurt. You are a healer. There should be more like you in this world! If there were, how lucky we would all be.
Laurie Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Life is a circle Duke and we return to the state of birth which then includes the lines of your limerick - thanks for the grin - Lindsay
Beaufort Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:49 AM
It's not all cake and a party getting there, but mostly a great ride. At least I can be happy each time I make it to the bathroom successfully!
Nunez Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 4:52 AM
:-)So we're back to the topic? It Depends?Hi Duke! :-) This gave me a chuckle!
Beaufort Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 5:01 PM
I just can't seem to get away from this. I don't know why I think about this stuff so often to the exclusion of almost everything else! It must have something to do with the crazy life. Thank-you for being here--you have no idea the good it does for me to read what you have to say. Simply marvelous!
Wigley Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Just go with the flow, Duke. Regards, Viv
Beaufort Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Funny. I just hope I can keep it under control!! Your poetry is such a pleasure in my life. May I thank you again for it? You have such a gentle and preceptive perspective.
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 1:52 PM
lol, this made overactivated my bladder, duke.. a fun work.. huggs
Beaufort Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Well, as long as you are aware of it then you are in good shape! This was based on another joke heard. What's the difference between old age and senility? In any case, may you have millions of laughs and much peace in this marvelous thing we call life.
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January 4, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Beautiful words my friend ,lovely and wise....hugs / / :) dalia
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January 17, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Dalia, I just read some of your recent works this morning. You are indeed a sweet poet. I am so very sorry about your friend, and I am in awe of how you have expressed your feelings.
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