Urge

sometimes we wish the freedom of sunset's pink clouds
                                     that cross the sky in ribbons
sometimes one urge piles on top of another, 
                                      the gathering bounty of spring
like
an urge to run through April rain, overcoming arthritic pain, 
                                                          an idle wanderer within

an urge to shake off the Blues like Jello loosened from its mold

an urge to spring clean clutter, messy like seaweed draped 
                                                                   over a walrus

an urge to stifle stress that sizzles like bacon frying, 
displacing contentment 

an urge to flush a slush pile of "to do's" that gag sleep 

an urge to watch birds at the feeder, tutored travelers 
                                                    chattily sharing stories

an urge to inhale the solemnity of church to void 
                                                             the wounds 
                                                              of striving

no longer subdued by the clean clasps of cold,
nature nudges newness into empty spaces
for winter leaving lifts the script of cold unforgiving, 
                                        like a child reciting rhymes




Poem composed April 17, 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/25/2023 8:35:00 AM
Some pretty eclectic urges, Brian. I love the urge of watching birds at the feeder chatting their stories. That is so awesome. Great vision:)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/25/2023 1:24:00 PM
Greetings Daniel, Thanks very much for your affirmative take on my posting. We do have seasonal urges, a few shared here. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 4/23/2023 1:25:00 PM
Sometimes one urge is enough to send us crazy, Brian, let alone when we get a long list like this! Congratulations on being on Constance's winners' list. ~ Regards // paul
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/23/2023 1:55:00 PM
Thanks very much Paul for your congratulatory note. Urges do consume us. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/19/2023 12:37:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win poem, Brian :) -
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/23/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thank you for your sunshine message. Most appreciative of your stop by. Cheers Brian
Date: 4/19/2023 9:54:00 AM
Hi Brian, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/23/2023 6:22:00 AM
Greetings Alexis, Very thoughtful of you to send congratulations. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 4/19/2023 6:46:00 AM
Brian, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Very nice !
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/19/2023 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Constance for the placement. I enjoyed the exercise of simile + metaphor dabbling. Cheers Brian
Date: 4/18/2023 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Brian.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/18/2023 8:07:00 PM
Thank you. Alfonso.
Date: 4/18/2023 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations your win Brian! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/18/2023 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Kind of you to acknowledge my poem especially given its placement. Sometimes simile + metaphor are like yesterday's tea. Be well. Brian
Date: 4/18/2023 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "Urge" write. Have a blessed day.................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/18/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, for your thoughtful message. Third place is certainly better than an NA. Be well. Brian
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