Premiere Contest WinnerUrban Seasoning Sonnets

If keen a goldfinch knits, loops and entwines
through hawthorn, urgent instinct loosens free. 
It's bright with flash that crimson blaze enshrines;
as summer scorches red, it could be me
when lying prone on beach or under tree,
in pensive mood when I gaze out to sea. 

If darkened lakes with troubled waves reflect
a dying forest's lonely leafless tree;
when time is stretched with endless hours' neglect, 
as late November breaks, it could be me
among the rushes singing sweet my plea
against the final sun and moons' decree.

If gathered swallows ghost in autumn's shade
and scissor night with scarlet skies that flee;
then darkling eves almost the stars invade.
Where shadows slowly dance, it might be me
that heads like ships to seek a sheltered quay
or sheep that search a fold across sharp scree. 

if spring is warm, Earth breaks the winter’s fast,
exploding green reveals my heart at last.

 "Urban sonnet" contest 20 April 2019
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 7:07 PM
Your poem shimmers exquisitely Brian! I see why it garnered first place. Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
Ravidas Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 2:11 PM
The flawless is worth of gold. Congrats, Brian)
Duffield Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 3:09 AM
Thank you
Pinet Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations Brian! Your poem has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge because I was very strict on Rhyming, well done my friend, Emile.
Duffield Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 3:09 AM
Wow.. Really appreciated
Ravidas Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Jesus, it's so flawless that I have not a slightest chance in the contest. Sad but true. But that doesn't erase my deepest pleasure in this beautiful sonnet. Good luck, Brian)
Duffield Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 11:24 AM
Really appreciate your positive comments. I've really tried to correct meter on this one
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