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Urban Seasoning Sonnets Premiere Contest Winner

If keen a goldfinch knits, loops and entwines through hawthorn, urgent instinct loosens free. It's bright with flash that crimson blaze enshrines; as summer scorches red, it could be me when lying prone on beach or under tree, in pensive mood when I gaze out to sea. If darkened lakes with troubled waves reflect a dying forest's lonely leafless tree; when time is stretched with endless hours' neglect, as late November breaks, it could be me among the rushes singing sweet my plea against the final sun and moons' decree. If gathered swallows ghost in autumn's shade and scissor night with scarlet skies that flee; then darkling eves almost the stars invade. Where shadows slowly dance, it might be me that heads like ships to seek a sheltered quay or sheep that search a fold across sharp scree. if spring is warm, Earth breaks the winter’s fast, exploding green reveals my heart at last. "Urban sonnet" contest 20 April 2019

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Date: 6/1/2019 7:07:00 PM
Your poem shimmers exquisitely Brian! I see why it garnered first place. Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
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Date: 5/31/2019 2:11:00 PM
The flawless is worth of gold. Congrats, Brian)
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Brian Duffield
Date: 6/1/2019 3:09:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/31/2019 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations Brian! Your poem has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge because I was very strict on Rhyming, well done my friend, Emile.
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Brian Duffield
Date: 6/1/2019 3:09:00 AM
Wow.. Really appreciated
Date: 4/26/2019 11:36:00 AM
Jesus, it's so flawless that I have not a slightest chance in the contest. Sad but true. But that doesn't erase my deepest pleasure in this beautiful sonnet. Good luck, Brian)
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Brian Duffield
Date: 4/30/2019 11:24:00 AM
Really appreciate your positive comments. I've really tried to correct meter on this one

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