Urban Legends: the They

Urban legends: The They My grandmother always believed When one watches t.v., there‘s an unidentified they inside Watching you back, as they spied in your house, on your habits, straight through your privacy Who is this they engaging in domesticated piracy? At first, we just discounted it like the dollar store But the more she said it, to Orwell’s credit I could no longer dismiss and ignore After all, I was born in 1984 Time passed on as she passed away But her warning of they echoed throughout the decades Feeling nostalgic, I thought I’d watch an old classic, possibly dragnet A Full House of Friends Mashin’ CHiPs preferred Carol Burnett So I turned to the channel and then it happened Somewhere in between the frequencies bounced around, lost in space, There it was or what appeared to be they face I quickly turned the TV off out of fear reverberations of my grandmother’s warning began tuning my ear I heard it loud and clear, too near it not to hear it, as the voice grew “You think you watchin’ that TV, but they watching you!”
Written April 5th, 2017, for the Urban Legends contest sponsored by Nayda Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/8/2017 12:13:00 PM
Very nice ink I enjoy your style of writing
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Date: 8/6/2017 10:00:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Sir.
Date: 5/2/2017 8:14:00 PM
Love the dark humor in your poem and the fact that you mentioned good old Carol Burnett! Congrats on a fine win PoetPrentice!~Che :)
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Date: 5/2/2017 10:43:00 PM
Thanks, Cheryl!
Date: 5/2/2017 1:51:00 PM
Very original take on the theme, congrats
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Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 5/2/2017 10:45:00 PM
Thank you, Brian. It was a challenge at first but once I saw the TV I quickly remembered what my grandmother said. I'll never forget it.
Date: 5/1/2017 6:24:00 PM
Very good Poem.
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Date: 5/2/2017 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Cecelia.
Date: 5/1/2017 3:37:00 AM
Heh, that is a great poem, those 'they' seem to exist after all... Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/2/2017 10:46:00 PM
Thank you, Darren!
Date: 4/7/2017 9:38:00 AM
I believe grandma maybe right, well done Poet Prentice...
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Date: 5/2/2017 10:46:00 PM
Yes, she was indeed! Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 4/5/2017 4:11:00 PM
Oooh fantastic write! I have long insisted my love cover the camera on his laptop ;) You're an awesome story teller. 7 Good luck in the contest. xomo!
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Date: 4/5/2017 9:06:00 PM
Thanks! I really appreciate your kind words, Mo.
Date: 4/5/2017 4:04:00 PM
Really very cool. So many good lines in this and the theme rocks. From what we have heard lately about smart TVs, it seems grandma was right all along. This should rally do well in the contest, it is very creative.
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Date: 4/5/2017 9:08:00 PM
Yeah, I'm an 80's/90's baby so some of those shows mentioned in lines were before my time but I do remember catching them on my grandmother's tv every now and then.
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