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Urban Fox

I am an Urban Fox
In human form , I know
A paradox.

I trot along my daily trail
And wag my bushy tail
With my disguise it’s no
Surprise, that people
Greet me all but one
As finest company
And really fun.

But; a ruddy Red Coat
On a horse, with brassy 
Bugle and hard hat
Of course, does follow
Me around; with malign
Intent on ending my
Amazing day, in the 
Jaws of his bloodhound.

I like to hide in coffee shops
He cannot see me there
With my disguise and human
Form, they let me in
But bloodhounds stay outside!

Ruddy Red Coat, poised
Perplexed, his Bugle
Ain’t much use, in 
Streets as filled
With traffics din
The hunt that won’t begin
Has made him vexed!

Then later on when 
Red Coats gone, I 
Return to my natural
Tune. I trot along
And sing my song
To the cities night time
Moon!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/16/2010 10:10:00 PM
That is a nice write, fun to read and imagine. Great thought process, David. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 3/9/2010 5:35:00 PM
This one really drew me in and kept my interest peaked til the end. Very nice. David B
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:49:00 PM
Good story, I liked the intrigue. Susan
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:47:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today David. May you have a wonderful week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:29:00 AM
Inspiration complete ..read my Victory poem and see for yourself.. also posted a new blog about my son calling from Iraq if u care to check it out and comment.. thankxxx David..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:24:00 AM
What a cool poem David.. very intricate write and the paralells are terrific... I so enjoyed ready this greatness from your gifted pen.. thankxxx for your sweet comments on my poetry also.. and I agree LUV is such a narcotic... now there is a line for inspiration to write another blockbuster poem on the subject... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:08:00 AM
Nice piece of irony David.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/7/2010 10:19:00 PM
This poem is a sing along poem indeed.. and hope that fox will not be hunted anymore....give him some Fresh air:),,love the concept here..David..Charma.
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Date: 3/7/2010 10:14:00 PM
This is great, original thinking, David, taking the fox and playing on its other meaing in the city. VEry enjoyable! andrea
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