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Upside Down World

Flip flop look what’s landed on top
Straight out of the barbershop
Bald head’s a bowling ball
Leg up high for aerial
Come swift stumbling to a full stop



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on January 4, 2018 for contest UPSIDE DOWN WORLD sponsored by EVE ROPER -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 10:54 PM
a fun poem Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 2:15 AM
Thank you, Jan. Much apopreciated.
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win with your very clever limerick Line. :))
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Thank you so much Roy. Very appreciated.
Callus Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Cute & funny, Line:) Congratulations on this merited win! Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 5:49 PM
Thank you, Paul.. Much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Way to go line, congrats on your win in Eve's contest.
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thanks, Richard. Much appreciated.
Y. Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Hi Line, Congrats on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thanks, Alexis. Much appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Glad to see this one again on the winner list, Line. Thanks for reading my poems today. I want to read more of yours but I don't have a lot of time tonight. Congrats with this fun limerick.
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Time is a precious commodity - there is never enough.
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Congratulations on your win,Line , :) enjoyed the Limerick . Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 6:20 AM
A fun read!
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Thanks, Vijay.
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 1:18 AM
Cute one, line!! Thanks for your recent comments and sorry it's taking me so long to getting back to poets this week.
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 7:02 AM
I think it's been more about family and friends time these past few weeks.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 10:32 PM
Lol delightful! Tickles the funny bone :) my best to you!
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Thanks, Maureen. All the best to you.
Gupta Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Hahaha ... Enjoying your nice Monoku with my morning tea ... so lovely ...
Gauthier Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Good morning, Probir. Nice to treat you half way around the world... as I prepare to bedtime in this hemisphere.
Gauthier Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Good morning, Probir. Nice to treat you half way around the world... as I prepare to bedtime in this hemisphere.
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