Upside Down Town

Upside Down Town

Not a ripple disturbs the
Surface of Sunset Lake.
In the bright sun
I squint across the pond,
And there I see my town
In the water mirror,
Upside down!
Houses standing on their roofs,
Their colors bleeding greens
And grays and yellows like
Paints on a silver-blue
Impressionistic canvas.

The gnarled branches
Of the oaks and maples,
Instead of reaching skyward,
Stretch their leafy fingers
Toward the bottom of the lake,
As if fishing for their lunch!
Upside down cars whiz by
Above the houses,
Wheels spinning in the air.
A patch of feathery yellow reeds
Grows down, not up, and
Sweeps the sandy depths.

Do you suppose that people
In those topsy-turvy houses
Are standing on their heads?
Or walking on the ceilings
Just as Mary Poppins did?
Maybe they just float,
Like astronauts in space,
And drink their soda
Through a straw and eat
From drifting plates!
It’s disorienting, yes,
To say the very least!

I really think I like 
My town much better 
Right side up!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/30/2021 10:48:00 PM
Great poem, Barbara with some unique thoughts there:)
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 7/31/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks. I very much appreciate them.
Date: 7/28/2021 3:49:00 PM
An interesting perspective, Barbara. Fine, if unusual, imagery. Yeah, I would think your last stanza says it very well.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 7/28/2021 8:35:00 PM
I should have mentioned that I was on a hill overlooking the harbor and the pond and the streets around them. Thanks again, friend.
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