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Uproar

Scurrying people
windy city wind whistling
Wet animals flee
Blue thunder, silver slick streets
Hued blooms close their perfumed rooms.

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Kim Rodrigues

August 16, 2023 at 8:21 PM

Lovely…love the last line!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 17, 2023 at 1:59 PM

I appreciate that, Kim.

Victor Buhagiar

August 15, 2023 at 12:43 PM

In such a short poem, one feels the emotions of rough weather. Great imagery as expected from you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 16, 2023 at 12:00 AM

That is great to hear, Victor. Thank you so much. :)

Akkina Downing

August 14, 2023 at 7:51 PM

An exquisite poem, Evelyn :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 15, 2023 at 10:20 AM

You have my deepest thanks, Akkina. :)

Yann Rolland

August 14, 2023 at 4:06 PM

so exquisite penning, thanks a lot evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 14, 2023 at 5:12 PM

Quite welcome. Thank you for your fine compliment, Yann.

Judy Ball

August 14, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Extremely well written and well expressed. I was able to see the rainy streets . You never fail to impress with your lovely description. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 14, 2023 at 5:11 PM

I appreciate your gratifying words very much, Judy. Thank you.

Joseph P. DiMino

August 14, 2023 at 7:47 AM

Very visual! Well done. Although the wet, slick inconvenience, there is something also majestically appealing about storms. You capture the sense in your poem perfectly.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 14, 2023 at 5:09 PM

Thank you, Joe. your words inspire and delight.