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Scurrying people windy city wind whistling Wet animals flee Blue thunder, silver slick streets Hued blooms close their perfumed rooms.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2023 8:21:00 PM

Lovely…love the last line!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2023 1:59:00 PM

I appreciate that, Kim.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/15/2023 12:43:00 PM

In such a short poem, one feels the emotions of rough weather. Great imagery as expected from you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/16/2023 12:00:00 AM

That is great to hear, Victor. Thank you so much. :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/14/2023 7:51:00 PM

An exquisite poem, Evelyn :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/15/2023 10:20:00 AM

You have my deepest thanks, Akkina. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/14/2023 4:06:00 PM

so exquisite penning, thanks a lot evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/14/2023 5:12:00 PM

Quite welcome. Thank you for your fine compliment, Yann.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/14/2023 9:55:00 AM

Extremely well written and well expressed. I was able to see the rainy streets . You never fail to impress with your lovely description. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/14/2023 5:11:00 PM

I appreciate your gratifying words very much, Judy. Thank you.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/14/2023 7:47:00 AM

Very visual! Well done. Although the wet, slick inconvenience, there is something also majestically appealing about storms. You capture the sense in your poem perfectly.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/14/2023 5:09:00 PM

Thank you, Joe. your words inspire and delight.