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Uprising

Empty hands were trying to collate the fallout after the trigger moment invited the unwelcome guest wearing explosive vest. It gives a push to throw away the paper and I walk up to the ink for a new chapter. The squinting sun was not able to break the stoic silence of adoration. A pervasive ambition spreads out on the breads of poor dreams. Pay no attention, pay no respect to the falling patriach. Daughters of broken stars were rising. Satish Verma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/9/2010 10:42:00 AM
The one in the mirror can always change their reflection. I once heard a line from a book: "There is a way to be good again." Your work is truly your gift, Satish- from my heart to yours...
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Date: 1/9/2010 5:12:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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