Upon This Precipice of Change

upon this precipice of change
where all must succumb
hues of brown to orange to yellow
where limbs become bare
shadows dance in skeletons
once bodies in fullness stood
the air no longer needs temperament cooling
a cold wind dances in, destiny unafraid
and only the most hardy of those with wings
sing in the early morning stillness
feast at feeders, grow fewer in numbers
it is in this moment of seasonal beauty
my heart aches for a time
when all this landscape holds
is a war that rages among the transition
from ice to mud
i wait within most deepest
the breath of the robin's song
dancing joyously upon the lawn
when at last the inner eye
sees the blooms waiting in the sunrise
it is here my faith is deepest
where all the promises are kept
so i sit on this bench as time
calls the next season in
when change permeates all i see
the inner eye knows
all assurances are waiting
when life takes me past time
in my own war of mud-to-ice
i will be forever free
where blooms greet the sunrise
where the green sea turns a deeper blue
the morrow of no more sorrow glistens

   Oregon   9/23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/14/2024 4:59:00 PM
We humans seem to sympathize with trees. We feel as they feel, as the seasons go by, for we change just as nature does ... A truly lovely poem to read this evening, especially since we are on the verge of spring... I saw a robin last week :)
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:18:00 AM
I think this might be the most beautiful seasonal transition poem I've read so far. Very well done Timothy
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Date: 10/10/2023 1:45:00 PM
thank you Tom, i am grateful for your comment
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