Upon These Wings of Freedom

Upon these wings of freedom
Pain shall never harm the beauty of such
Full of the glowing strength of the mountains
And a mothers gentle touch.

Upon these wings of freedom
I leave behind my darkend past
Gliding towards my golden lane 
Of memories that will forever last.

Upon these wings of freedom
My laughter and smiles are soul deep
Never again to be pretending
Never again I will shout or weep.

Upon these wings of an angel,
Heaven has portrayed,
Every bone and every feather,
My true self was found and made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/26/2009 1:28:00 PM
Such revelations and beliefs in ones self and the help of assurances along the paths of lifes ways....a great revelation to hold tight unto dear talented Catherien~the leaving behind of the darkened and sometines hopelessly feeling negatives~and the latching onto the forthcoming promises and dreams! No lomger waisting them chances or moments given within this once to lived life!? Beautiful inspirational write dear lady! And, my love to you and yours always, John!:) Hope You are wonderful, bye!:)
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Date: 3/25/2009 3:27:00 PM
Dearest Catherine! I have spent over that last two hours trying to post a comment to this beutifully inspirational poem of yours dearest lady~but for some reason it keeps erasing my words? Frown~So I guess I shall have to try later!? But, I truly truly love it!! My Love To Always, John!!:) See You soon dear lady~Bye:)
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:01:00 AM
beautifully written and wonderful personification ..... keep up the good work!=)
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:59:00 PM
A very thoughtful poem with a nice rhyming flow. I think the poem speaks of soul, gliding towards heaven, leaving behind the dark world of pains. Nice imagination. Thank you for your kind comment on "Drifting Clouds." With best wishes-Suresh.
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:10:00 PM
Beautiful uplifting spiritual write...I found it so gentle and calming with great rhyme and tone..It just flowed beautifully. I simply love the title, it's what first drew me in but after reading, it gave me such a sense of peace...that one could find such contentment...I long for that day - I like this so much, it's going into my favorites..Great Job, GB~ Tyesha
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