Upon the Fireplace Mantle

Upon the fireplace mantle
A metal high container
Filled with white flowers
Two birthday cards lean
In the middle stands 
The large family painting
A waterwheel house
On a farmer's field
Beside this painting
Two photo's found
Followed by a glass
Candle light
In front of that
Stands a small angel
Watching, keeping,guard
On top of the mantle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pederson Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 10:50 AM
makes me want to have a nice fire underneath your imagery. so nicely put together.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Hello Douglas,oh go ahead. Thank you for the lovely comment. I like the fireplace it is a place to be with a love one. have a nice day my friend.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 5:57 AM
Very beautiful, like walking into a painting that tells a story, leaving one to stand there and turn around to view the detail of the person telling the story and the detail of what led the storyteller there...I love this very much. Beautiful and magic. x
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Hello Leanne Love-joy Burton, Thank you for the lovely comment. As I wrote this poem, I felt I was there. Have a nice day my friend.
Kiser Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:02 PM
This is such a peaceful and serene piece of work I feel at home in this house. Lovely.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser, thank you.I would feel the same way in this house to. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Lee Sr. Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 4:49 PM
WoW!! this is sweet and lovely makes me think I'm visiting an grandparent or auntie home when I was a child..Lovely write. So inspirational beautiful .. A "FAV" for me.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 6:08 PM
Hello James Thank you James for a lovely comment. so nice to see you. I hope all is well with you. Thank you for a lovely comment. I am pleased that you made this poem a fav. Have a nice evening my friend.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 11:14 PM
Wonderful poem. Described so clearly.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Hello Allen Belschmidt Sr so nice to hear from you. Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. have a nice day my friend.
Mcguire Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 8:41 PM
And to hear those conversations in front of that mantle. Wonderful poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Hello Timothy McGuire, I hope all is going well for you today. Oh... yes also to hear the conversations in front of the mantle. have a nice day my friend.
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Extraordinary, i admire this poem.
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 2:08 PM
No Ma, rather :)
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Know Ma, I am not new here, only that, I was missing in action.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Hello Charles Melody Lightning Ink, so nice to meet you. Are you new? Then welcome to poetry 'soup. Thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.
Rose  Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 4:52 AM
You paint us a pretty photo with words and heartful imagery. Thanks Darlene for your kind visit my page, Have a wonderful day . xo
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Hello Pixie,thank you for the lovely comment. your welcomed. Have a nice day my friend.
Andresen Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 1:11 PM
- I can see it with my eyes ... lovely written Darlene :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, thank you for the lovely comment. Happu weekend to you. Hugs>Darlene
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 6:46 PM
Lovely sentiments decorate the mantel! :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Hello Kim, yes the mantle has many objects upon it. For Christmas it always decorated. have a nice dat mt friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 4:21 PM
A lovely image Darlene, when I was growing up we had an open fire with a mantle. Tom.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Hello tom, I like the mantle, anything can be put onto it, to add a difference. Have a nice day my friend.
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