Upon Sweet Winged Dreams

Somnolence of sweet dreams.
These are given to be most combustible or tranquil.
Taken them in midday and midnight flights.
These truly are a delicate delight.

Now, soaring adoring and affixed with inner might.
Mortals dream to release a dove or hawk tonight.

To be exercised is our inside plight.
We have been given grace, mercy and divine inspiration,
to surpass these extremities in life.

If, we do not defer hope, we are able
to elevate ourselves to greater heights.
We only being bound by Earth’s invisible
gravitational atmospheric rights.

I feel, I see, I live, and yet, still possible to die.
We have an ethereal essence;
ours is an entity of intrinsic light.
A spiritual immortality given us at birth with foresight.
Our future already written on invisible scrolls for us to recite.

There are angel allies traversing multiple dimensions
of time and space to unite.
Winged warriors warring and winning
a contested celestial battle and fight.

I do ride upon golden and platinum colored
feathered wings of a very large eagle this very night.
This to win the battle of the imagined Enkro land
most lethal of sites.

The morning time abruptly commence.
I realize that I had been dreaming, to be
awakened by the dawn's early bright rays
of the sun refreshing and renewing sunlight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 2, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Fueled by the love of God!! Nice!
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Hi J. Hamilton, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings
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March 9, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 3:50 PM
Thanks, Hamilton, same to you. "God Bless."
Buck Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Ron: I'm a 2 syllable/simple rhymer. However I enjoy reading others "good" stuff. This created beautiful mental images for me. Maybe not the ones you intended but enjoyable non the less. Maybe that's part of the magic of poetry. Lovely words painted by one, interpreted by others. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Hi Buck, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Thanks buck, I am glad that you enjoyed the poem. I believe that I tried to make it so and much enjoyable for any time re-reads. Enjoy, also view my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Agbo Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 5:14 AM
"I live, yet possible to die"; this line is expository. Well done!
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Hi Chijoke, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Thanks, yes I believe I was lead to give inspiration and insight to a few things, amen. Also, visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Michael Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Buenos dias Ronald... I enjoyed reading your poem...Nice work my friend... Have a wonderful day...
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Hi Arturo, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thanks, mi amigo. Glad that you enjoyed it.
Lindley Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Great poem written in a hard form to tackle(AT LEAST FOR ME IT IS).. A FAV...
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Hi Robert, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 11:21 PM
I just added on more stanza for more the merry're enjoyment.
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Just updated the poem, now even more sweet. Thanks
Williams Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Yes, I believe that it was destine to be in that form with ryhme. Thanks Robert. Check out the Days of Yore, it is also now in Quintain form. God Bless
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August 17, 2017 at 11:12 AM
I love this line "to be exercised is our insight plight"...absolutely beautiful poem! :)
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Hi Akkina, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 11:21 PM
I just added on more stanza for more the merry're enjoyment.
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Just updated the poem, now even more sweet. Thanks
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 11:32 AM
Just updated the poem in its given perfection, I believe. Thanks
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Thanks Dowing, I am glad that you are one of biggest Fan. Amen, God Bless.
Sergi Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 7:57 PM
A beautiful insight of the beauty of Flight and the Wings that direct you to an unearthly atmosphere. Great Write, Ronald.
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Hi Ralph, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 11:21 PM
I just added on more stanza for more the merry're enjoyment.
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Just updated the poem, now even more sweet. Thanks
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 11:32 AM
Just updated the poem in its given perfection, I believe. Thanks
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Just slightly edited the Poem mostly at the end.
Williams Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 8:12 PM
Thanks Ralph, just put in the official copyright today. Also, make sure to visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net. and the book Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems.
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August 6, 2017 at 7:39 PM
What a very beautiful, inspirational Quintain! I enjoyed your flawless flow and amazing imagery! Well done, my friend! Pandita
Williams Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Hi Pandita, this last revision just revised for to make for a very complete rhyme and also a quintain poem still and flawless flow. Amen, Blessing. You know that an artist can go on but I believe that it is full, total and complete in every which way. Blessings
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Hi, I just revised slightly and updated the poem. I believe that it is even more better and concise. Amen, Blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 1:01 PM
Just revised and updated the poem for a more golden classical piece. Amen, Blessing. Still very much uniform and flow.
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 11:21 PM
I just added on more stanza for more the merry're enjoyment.
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Just updated the poem, now even more sweet. Thanks
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Just updated the poem in its given perfection, I believe. Thanks
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Just slightly edited the Poem mostly at the end.
Williams Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Thanks very much Pandita, Also, please make sure to also visit my website as the Lord has given me www.jesuschristvisitation.net and the book, "Jesus Christ the Messiah Visitation: Nature and Bible Poems." Be blessed and God Bless. Amen
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