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Upon Reflection and Recollection

Two                       (Form)

      Ends                      Passing

     Meeting                   through..."

  (form a circle)          A circle meeting

      Passing                      On

         On                          Two.

      Through                     Ends

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Poet Destroyer A

January 14, 2014 at 11:35 AM

Joe, ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. [email protected] :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

Michelle Mac Donald

June 6, 2012 at 7:16 PM

A seeminly simple but strong form, Joe. Your creative mind can pick up on what might appear be a mundane object. However you've created it into a pièce de résistance. Nicely penned! Best wishes, Love, Mikki

James Fraser

November 20, 2011 at 1:03 PM

Clever writing concept Joe, nicely written, leaving the reader to think. Have a lovely Sunday :)

Anne Rutherford

May 31, 2011 at 5:34 PM

Wow Joe how clever you are , simple but very very good work. you should make this one into a contest to see what else our poets can come up with. Anne.

Sara Kendrick

May 6, 2011 at 1:28 PM

Interesting thoughts and creative presentation..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

April 21, 2011 at 6:53 PM

How are you Joe,... besides at your best... thanks for the hi's while i was out... i'm smiling again... and here to stay..lol... the last time i said that... things went wrong... enjoyed the form here..p.d.

Robert Ball

April 16, 2011 at 4:39 PM

because it's different, God bless, and thank you for your comment, you were the only one, oh well that's life we just came from the beach as I live 500 yards away, So the Lord is great.

Andrea Dietrich

April 13, 2011 at 10:54 PM

I just came back to this cool set because I am going in circles trying to find a poem of yours I never ead. Perhaps there are none! thanks for your comments today.

April 13, 2011 at 6:33 PM

What an interesting piece. I like the artistic presentation. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment on mine. Karen

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

April 10, 2011 at 12:59 PM

Interesting Joe.An absolute beauty.Thank you for your kind congrats to me on my win Joe.~Teresa~

James Foulk

April 5, 2011 at 9:51 AM

yes very interesting piece of poetry, very creative. thank you for reading Newton Corners and for your comment.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 3, 2011 at 10:50 PM

Very intriguing & interesting piece you have here, Joe-- you got me reading & re-reading this-- so cool how you use the same words for each "column" -- it's definitely like a riddle!Enjoyed reading this thought-provoking write :)

Eamon Duffin

April 2, 2011 at 12:30 PM

Forgot to leave rating 1st time. Done now

Eamon Duffin

April 2, 2011 at 12:27 PM

Hi Joe. Just back to normal (whatever that is) after tour of Germany. Will get back to the writing soon. Nice to visit again. This is a clever piece, makes one think until we accept that the different is the same. Nice to be back. Eamon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 31, 2011 at 1:08 PM

thankxx Joe my friend.. much appreciated that my words touched u as u read on the gift of creating poetry luv..

Doris Culverhouse

March 31, 2011 at 6:01 AM

different poem, enjyoed

Constance La France

March 30, 2011 at 4:41 PM

I've read this many times now, it reminds me of a riddle, I can connect different words together, very original and creative, Joe~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 29, 2011 at 8:36 PM

thankxx Joe ..appreciate your thoughts on my contest entry luv.. very encouraging remarks my friend...

Matthew Anish

March 29, 2011 at 6:50 PM

Good example of a "shape" poem! Thank you for commenitng on my Last Jew on Earth. You are the only one - so far who did. I just entered a member contest. Yours Matthew Anish

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 29, 2011 at 4:29 PM

Very creative and intellectual write , Joe

Carolyn Devonshire

March 29, 2011 at 11:56 AM

What an interesting new form you've created here, Joe. Always did like the thought of rings being an eternal symbol of unity. If one rides life in a circle, it goes on forever. That is our hope when exchanging rings at weddings, but sometimes those unions are broken. Very clever! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 29, 2011 at 8:26 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Joe. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol