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Room spins Age wins

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Date: 8/31/2025 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations. Four words with forceful impact!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2025 3:55:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and the nice congratulations. Sara K
Date: 8/30/2025 4:44:00 AM
Very clever, (and wise) Sara ! Those four words deserve the Trophy. Hav a beautiful weekend.x.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/30/2025 6:10:00 AM
Why, thank you, Ghairo. I appreciate the visit and uplifting review. Sara K
Date: 8/26/2025 9:36:00 PM
That's for sure! Well done
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/27/2025 4:22:00 AM
Andrea, not you as well. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K
Date: 8/26/2025 2:11:00 AM
You captured the act of an old woman rising perfectly.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/26/2025 4:55:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. I have had a few of these instances myself and I am old, but my husband lives with it most days even with meds to help. Sara K
Date: 8/25/2025 10:38:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on your trophy win in Brian's contest. You have said so much in four impactful words! Great job! Blessings and prayers!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/25/2025 1:48:00 PM
Thank you, Sam, for the nice review and congratulations on my work. I always need prayers and blessings so thank you for them. Sara K
Date: 8/24/2025 11:21:00 PM
Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win dear Sara. Great footle. Enjoy the honor.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/25/2025 3:46:00 AM
Why, thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the nice review. Thanks for supporting my writing. Sara K
Date: 8/23/2025 3:30:00 PM
We use to write of things we loved. Now we write of the pains that love us.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 4:48:00 PM
John, remind me about love. LOL..We will soon be married 63 years. I'm afraid that if I were to try to get a spark going under the kindling, it would be so old, dry, and crackling it would explode. Sara K
Date: 8/23/2025 7:56:00 AM
Brilliant, congratulations
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 11:39:00 AM
I appreciate the visit with congratulations, Terry. Your visits are special. Sara K
Date: 8/23/2025 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 11:39:00 AM
Why, thank you, Trina. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 10:01:00 PM
Oh Sara if truth could be bottled it would be your Footle. Love it !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 4:11:00 AM
SV, I don't remember my parents or my husband's parents complaining about being dizzy, but I had one aunt that did. I wonder why it is so prevalent today. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 6:54:00 PM
So meaningful. Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 4:09:00 AM
Why, thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 5:11:00 PM
so clever and short, bravo poet
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 4:09:00 AM
Thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 4:57:00 PM
Good footle. My "feet" don't want to cooperate sometimes after sitting for too many hours on end. Congratulations.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 4:08:00 AM
Reason, Seems you totally understand the plight of some people especially some who are older now. Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 8/22/2025 4:59:00 PM
love your footle, Sara, so relevant to my existence.
Date: 8/22/2025 4:54:00 PM
- Back with a congratulation, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/23/2025 4:07:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for going the extra mile to say congratulations on my work. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 4:06:00 PM
Congrats!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, for the second visit and the nice congrats. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2025 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Marilene, for dropping by with congrats. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 3:06:00 PM
Sara, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win! This footle resonates with me! Janice
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2025 4:21:00 PM
Janice, I think a lot of people do understand. I wonder why we are having so much dizziness. I don't remember my parents having that problem. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 2:29:00 PM
Dizzy one. Congratulations on the win, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2025 4:20:00 PM
Thank you, Lin, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate you doing so. Sara K
Date: 8/22/2025 7:58:00 AM
Very well done, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2025 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 8/21/2025 5:09:00 PM
well said, Sara K. I feel that way some days, well now most days, especially early in the morning. Sigh. Have a blessed evening, Sara B
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2025 4:22:00 AM
Isn't it aggravating, Sara B., for everything to spin. I have problems sometimes, my husband a lot of times. Sara K
Date: 8/21/2025 1:06:00 PM
- The truth of aging, Sara - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2025 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for understanding, Anne-Lise. Thanks for the hugs. Your visits add a special touch to my page. Sara K
Date: 8/21/2025 7:53:00 AM
No Doubt, words out, Perfect Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2025 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, Mark. I appreciate the kind review of my work and doing some more rhyming for me. Sara K
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