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Room spins
Age wins

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/21/2025 5:09:00 PM

well said, Sara K. I feel that way some days, well now most days, especially early in the morning. Sigh. Have a blessed evening, Sara B

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2025 1:06:00 PM

- The truth of aging, Sara - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2025 1:41:00 PM

Thanks for understanding, Anne-Lise. Thanks for the hugs. Your visits add a special touch to my page. Sara K

Mark Hughes

Date: 8/21/2025 7:53:00 AM

No Doubt, words out, Perfect Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2025 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Mark. I appreciate the kind review of my work and doing some more rhyming for me. Sara K