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Upon Arising

Room spins
Age wins

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Ghairo Daniels

August 30, 2025 at 4:44 AM

Very clever, (and wise) Sara ! Those four words deserve the Trophy. Hav a beautiful weekend.x.

Sara Kendrick

August 30, 2025 at 6:10 AM

Why, thank you, Ghairo. I appreciate the visit and uplifting review. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2025 at 9:36 PM

That's for sure! Well done

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2025 at 4:22 AM

Andrea, not you as well. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

August 26, 2025 at 2:11 AM

You captured the act of an old woman rising perfectly.

Sara Kendrick

August 26, 2025 at 4:55 AM

Thank you, Victor. I have had a few of these instances myself and I am old, but my husband lives with it most days even with meds to help. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

August 25, 2025 at 10:38 AM

Sara, congratulations on your trophy win in Brian's contest. You have said so much in four impactful words! Great job! Blessings and prayers!

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2025 at 1:48 PM

Thank you, Sam, for the nice review and congratulations on my work. I always need prayers and blessings so thank you for them. Sara K

Valsa George

August 24, 2025 at 11:21 PM

Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win dear Sara. Great footle. Enjoy the honor.

Sara Kendrick

August 25, 2025 at 3:46 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the nice review. Thanks for supporting my writing. Sara K

John Loving Iii

August 23, 2025 at 3:30 PM

We use to write of things we loved. Now we write of the pains that love us.

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 4:48 PM

John, remind me about love. LOL..We will soon be married 63 years. I'm afraid that if I were to try to get a spark going under the kindling, it would be so old, dry, and crackling it would explode. Sara K

Terry Miller

August 23, 2025 at 7:56 AM

Brilliant, congratulations

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 11:39 AM

I appreciate the visit with congratulations, Terry. Your visits are special. Sara K

Trina Layne

August 23, 2025 at 6:31 AM

Congratulations, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 11:39 AM

Why, thank you, Trina. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K

Speaks Volumes

August 22, 2025 at 10:01 PM

Oh Sara if truth could be bottled it would be your Footle. Love it !

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 4:11 AM

SV, I don't remember my parents or my husband's parents complaining about being dizzy, but I had one aunt that did. I wonder why it is so prevalent today. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Sara K

Valsa George

August 22, 2025 at 6:54 PM

So meaningful. Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win.

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 4:09 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K

Yann Rolland

August 22, 2025 at 5:11 PM

so clever and short, bravo poet

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 4:09 AM

Thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Reason A. Poteet

August 22, 2025 at 4:57 PM

Good footle. My "feet" don't want to cooperate sometimes after sitting for too many hours on end. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 4:08 AM

Reason, Seems you totally understand the plight of some people especially some who are older now. Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Reason A. Poteet

August 22, 2025 at 4:59 PM

love your footle, Sara, so relevant to my existence.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 22, 2025 at 4:54 PM

- Back with a congratulation, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2025 at 4:07 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for going the extra mile to say congratulations on my work. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

August 22, 2025 at 4:06 PM

Congrats!

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2025 at 4:22 PM

Thank you, Kim, for the second visit and the nice congrats. Sara K

Marilene Evans

August 22, 2025 at 3:44 PM

Congratulations, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2025 at 4:21 PM

Thank you, Marilene, for dropping by with congrats. Sara K

Janice Canerdy

August 22, 2025 at 3:06 PM

Sara, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win! This footle resonates with me! Janice

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2025 at 4:21 PM

Janice, I think a lot of people do understand. I wonder why we are having so much dizziness. I don't remember my parents having that problem. Sara K

Lin Lane

August 22, 2025 at 2:29 PM

Dizzy one. Congratulations on the win, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2025 at 4:20 PM

Thank you, Lin, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate you doing so. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

August 22, 2025 at 7:58 AM

Very well done, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2025 at 1:25 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker

August 21, 2025 at 5:09 PM

well said, Sara K. I feel that way some days, well now most days, especially early in the morning. Sigh. Have a blessed evening, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2025 at 4:22 AM

Isn't it aggravating, Sara B., for everything to spin. I have problems sometimes, my husband a lot of times. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 21, 2025 at 1:06 PM

- The truth of aging, Sara - hugs

Sara Kendrick

August 21, 2025 at 1:41 PM

Thanks for understanding, Anne-Lise. Thanks for the hugs. Your visits add a special touch to my page. Sara K

Mark Hughes

August 21, 2025 at 7:53 AM

No Doubt, words out, Perfect Sara!

Sara Kendrick

August 21, 2025 at 8:26 AM

Thank you, Mark. I appreciate the kind review of my work and doing some more rhyming for me. Sara K

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