Upo' the Gilded Brae

Lo' beneigh' the random bield, bewails upo' the leaf
An' lea'e me naught but grief and pain, as moone breaks through the heath
Upo' the gilded braes we kissed, luve sang a zephyrs cry
Where say, my luve, o' fare thee weel, till a' the seas gang dry

An' bleak October winds ensue, beneigh' the furrow's frost
The sacred lowe, o' week-plac'd love...o' lost my sweet betroth
Yea withered ere', lies mist and bleak, an' mine an empty hand
With sword in hand, yea wander'd far, monie a ravished land

Och! Fated arrow pierced my heart, cauld by thy warrior's blade
Thy sun has waned, the bluid has poured, so boldly o're the glade
Death oftly feared, tho fear naugt more, so deep within my breast
O' do thou kindly, lie him low, upo' this mound of rest

Whase only faut was lovin thee, my tears in dust, my luve is deeply laid
Immortal I lie down 'ere now, lockt in thy arms, upo' the gilded glade
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beneigh (beneath)
bield (shelter)
bewails (weeps) 
 heath (meadows) 
gilded braes...(golden hills)
lea'e (leaves) 
naught (not)
luve (love)  
a' (all) 
gang (going -gone)
sacred lowe (sacred vow) 
monie (many) 
cauld (cold) 
bluid (blood) 
o're (over)
upo' (upon) 
whase (whose)
faut (fault) 
'ere (here) 
lockt (locked)


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Date: 8/3/2011 12:34:00 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Thvia's "Indulge Me" contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 5:49:00 AM
Many congrats on your first place win in the contest
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:34:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:05:00 PM
hey carrie, congrats on a terrific win, well deserved, David
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:01:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win with this rousing creation on Scotland poetry luv..
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:47:00 AM
Wonderful job Carrie. A well deserved win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:27:00 AM
Many congrats, Carrie : )
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:04:00 AM
bloody grreat, carrie... heaps of cheers on your awesome win!! :) huggs!
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Date: 8/2/2011 7:58:00 AM
I absolutely loved this entry, very well done!
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Carrie! Obviously, you did more than try! Great 2nd Place win! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/3/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congrats on the second place.
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Date: 11/1/2010 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.Sara
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Date: 11/1/2010 12:48:00 PM
You tried and you SUCCEEDED! Awesome write, Carrie. Sounds like Chaucer to me. Congratulations on you well-deserved win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:08:00 AM
Debbie.I think this is great,so clever.So glad of the translation!Well done on your win.You more than tried,you succeeded! love June
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carrie
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:21:00 PM
You sure did try Carrie! What an amazing effort to do a dialect verse in true sonnet form I want you to read it for me on YouTube!!!! The Laddie took #1 for he made me swoon, it was a hard choice!!!! Light & Love (soup mail)
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Date: 10/10/2010 12:06:00 PM
excellent thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/8/2010 2:48:00 PM
I'll just start with "Clancy" dearie, and in high hopes that it's not just the fish you were catching the day you wrote this fine fine piece! much love, james
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:16:00 PM
My parents are frtom Ireland. You tried and you succeeded. Well done, my dear. Regards from Gerard!
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Date: 10/6/2010 1:19:00 PM
very nice, reminscent of Burns, i'm singing 'our luv is like a red, red rose' now. Mine is not near as sweet, in fact it's rather macabre... ha ha. Good luck to you!
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:47:00 AM
Carie, Carie, awesome, awesome ... you found your voice in this ... a voice I pray you will always keep ... this is pure magic that I read, and tells me why you were since of old one of my favorite poets. One love
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:21:00 AM
Carrie, brilliant effort I would say. Beautiful and sad write. Good luck for the contest ~ love Wilma
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:20:00 PM
SAd and romantic. I am not one for these dialect poems, but it's cool you can just get the translation online, huh? I just know it's gonna do well! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:39:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one that you tried very hard...Thanks for stopoping by my blog and the kind comments...We have not heard anything else..Sara
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