Get Your Premium Membership

Uphill 'N' Downhill Through Life

Take life for an escalator Go both through its ups and downs Ride it like on an elevator Expect both smiles and frowns. Take life for a suspense novel you and I unaware what the next day will hold Meditate and muse, or this book of life just peruse Pore over it to watch life's mysteries unfold. Take life for the open sea But pray drown not yourself in it lest you lose sight of God's shore and thereby lose all spiritual wit. Take life for a candle let its glow illumine others too and in each and every of its flicker Try finding a hint or clue Each soul's life unique as mazes of one's thumbprint And usually for many life's quite an uphill battle At times sweet as molasses, at times bitter as mint and life's roller coaster shakes you like a rattle. If you let yourself be intoxicated by life Be prepared for the hangovers Better taste of the goblet of life making right choices like wine conneisseurs Life tis like the rise and fall of notes Consoling to find people in the same boats Ah on life you can find a zillion quotes. Thus ponder over your life and reflect how good you've been to it and not just how it's been treating you Veer around the pit, and keep your path lit for darkness of the soul is for you unfit. (relates to the contest prompt in how we should live our lives being ourselves coz we are all unique but we should also blossom into a giving spirit at heart)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/4/2016 10:33:00 AM
Such supeb contrast related to life.....lovely poetic piece sis
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2014 6:03:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you on this win,Zaynub
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2014 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations S. Zaynub Kamoonpuri, your poem showed lots of contrasts that can make you veer. Thanks for entering. Sorry to be so late posting results, I was out of computer reach for a time.
Login to Reply
Kamoonpuri Avatar
S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/8/2014 1:00:00 AM
Hi yes to veer around pits yet be on the straight path. Warmest thanx sheri
Date: 6/10/2014 3:45:00 PM
S Zaynub, CONGRATULATIONS.... You sure slammed the slam.... Hugs... LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 6/10/2014 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on a great win! Bravo!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2014 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my slamming contest… Verlena
Login to Reply
Date: 1/23/2014 7:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/22/2014 1:40:00 PM
this is good congrats on win Shadow x smile hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2014 9:31:00 PM
Inspiring write on the words of wisdom and congrats on the win, zaynub
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2013 4:40:00 AM
This is an amazing write--complex in it's structure and rhyme yet simple and cogent in it's message. So glad I discovered your poetry.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/3/2013 10:19:00 AM
thoughtful write indeed
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2013 9:28:00 PM
Wow! This is absolutely an excellent write my dear friend SZ. Good food for thoughts and lessons in life! You did it very well. So love and thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much as well for enjoying my latest poem and your wonderful comments. Have a great weekend! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 10/31/2013 9:46:00 PM
lovely execution , good observation on life , i enjoyed it while reading ...
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2013 6:46:00 PM
Szk...i like the lines that reflect upon our commonalities....makes one less lonely...jimbo
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2013 3:36:00 PM
thoughtful and thought provoking indeed, my friend
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2013 2:02:00 PM
- Lessons in life .... very well written!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2013 1:46:00 PM
Superbly written Pal. I enjoyed reading. very realistic.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2013 10:58:00 AM
great work u like sufiism ?
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2013 9:29:00 AM
What a look at life!!!, Zaynub
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2013 5:48:00 AM
I like the comparisons..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/28/2013 4:57:00 AM
This is one of the rarest poems I have read which looks at life very realistically and optimistically, too. Please hit us with more soul-lifting poems!
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs