Uphill 'N' Downhill Through Life

Take life for an escalator
Go both through its ups 
and downs
Ride it like on an elevator
Expect both smiles and 
frowns.

Take life for a suspense 
novel
you and I unaware what 
the next day will hold
Meditate and muse, or 
this book of life just 
peruse
Pore over it to watch 
life's mysteries unfold.

Take life for the open sea
But pray drown not 
yourself in it
lest you lose sight of 
God's shore
and thereby lose all 
spiritual wit.


Take life for a candle
let its glow illumine 
others too
and in each and every of 
its flicker
Try finding a hint or clue

Each soul's life unique as 
mazes of one's 
thumbprint
And usually for many 
life's quite an uphill battle
At times sweet as 
molasses, at times bitter 
as mint
and life's roller coaster 
shakes you like a rattle.


If you let yourself be intoxicated by life
Be prepared for the hangovers
Better taste of the goblet of life
making right choices like wine conneisseurs

Life tis like the rise and 
fall of notes
Consoling to find people 
in the same boats
Ah on life you can find a 
zillion quotes.

Thus ponder over your 
life and reflect
how good you've been 
to it
and not just how it's 
been treating you
Veer around the pit, and 
keep your path lit
for darkness of the soul 
is for you unfit.

(relates to the contest 
prompt in how we 
should live our lives 
being ourselves coz we 
are all unique but we 
should also blossom into 
a giving spirit at heart)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/4/2016 10:33:00 AM
Such supeb contrast related to life.....lovely poetic piece sis
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Date: 10/8/2014 6:03:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you on this win,Zaynub
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations S. Zaynub Kamoonpuri, your poem showed lots of contrasts that can make you veer. Thanks for entering. Sorry to be so late posting results, I was out of computer reach for a time.
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:00:00 AM
Hi yes to veer around pits yet be on the straight path. Warmest thanx sheri
Date: 6/10/2014 3:45:00 PM
S Zaynub, CONGRATULATIONS.... You sure slammed the slam.... Hugs... LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2014 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on a great win! Bravo!
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my slamming contest… Verlena
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Date: 1/23/2014 7:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 1/22/2014 1:40:00 PM
this is good congrats on win Shadow x smile hugs
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:31:00 PM
Inspiring write on the words of wisdom and congrats on the win, zaynub
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Date: 12/1/2013 4:40:00 AM
This is an amazing write--complex in it's structure and rhyme yet simple and cogent in it's message. So glad I discovered your poetry.
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:19:00 AM
thoughtful write indeed
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Date: 11/2/2013 9:28:00 PM
Wow! This is absolutely an excellent write my dear friend SZ. Good food for thoughts and lessons in life! You did it very well. So love and thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much as well for enjoying my latest poem and your wonderful comments. Have a great weekend! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/31/2013 9:46:00 PM
lovely execution , good observation on life , i enjoyed it while reading ...
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Date: 10/29/2013 6:46:00 PM
Szk...i like the lines that reflect upon our commonalities....makes one less lonely...jimbo
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Date: 10/29/2013 3:36:00 PM
thoughtful and thought provoking indeed, my friend
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Date: 10/29/2013 2:02:00 PM
- Lessons in life .... very well written!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 1:46:00 PM
Superbly written Pal. I enjoyed reading. very realistic.
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:58:00 AM
great work u like sufiism ?
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:29:00 AM
What a look at life!!!, Zaynub
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Date: 10/28/2013 5:48:00 AM
I like the comparisons..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:57:00 AM
This is one of the rarest poems I have read which looks at life very realistically and optimistically, too. Please hit us with more soul-lifting poems!
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