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He had a dream Actually, it was a passion The dream took him away To the seas, the sands, the ventures Beyond this land, onto foreign soil He had a dream It was more than a mere illusion The dream breathed hope and faith It colored his thoughts in prayers Wrote poetry through his caress He had a dream To reach beyond the walls Of a land filled with soldiers To a land that needed his boldness A land that would be freed from wars He had a dream Captivating even his mornings With thoughts of fulfilling his destiny Blessing others with his abilities His skills with weapons and artilleries He had a dream Focusing on winning sweet peace On foreign soil, where he would go To give hope to the inhabitants Of a time in need of armaments He had a dream His heart was filled with belief In this calling to the frontlines Where he could fulfill his fantasies His hope of bringing accord to strange lands He had a dream And I don’t think he imagined the ending When shells would wound and hearts would mourn As he felt the fall cut through his heart’s hope When his dream, his ambition, went up in smoke! This or That, Vol 9 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Title Chosen is UP IN SMOKE January 7, 2022

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Date: 1/28/2022 7:55:00 AM
Splendid work as always, Regina:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 1/25/2022 7:58:00 PM
"He had a dream" - Great refrain and beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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