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Latterly skies blazed after gold riches were lost mourned by seas of blooms exuding heady perfumes Scarlet sun has gone down slow

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Date: 6/10/2023 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful descriptions in this Tanka, my friend. Thanks for sharing, Evelyn. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/10/2023 7:28:00 PM
Your appreciation is a joy. Thank you, Bill.
Date: 6/6/2023 1:13:00 PM
Soothing! Love latterly skies. Another beauty, dear friend!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2023 4:10:00 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks, Kim. :)
Date: 6/6/2023 5:24:00 AM
Great capture of nature in realm of sunset, Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2023 10:44:00 AM
Your comment is valued. Thank you.
Date: 6/5/2023 11:37:00 PM
Exquisite imagery. Loved the scene.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2023 10:42:00 AM
Your appreciation is extra nice. Thank you.
Date: 6/5/2023 11:09:00 PM
this is quite charming and inspiring, i love the subtle interference between flowers and sun have a nice day
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2023 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Yann.
Date: 6/5/2023 8:18:00 PM
Evelyn, your Tanka is both charming and sweet! I relished the vivid imagery of the sky turning crimson after the loss of gold fortunes, a sorrow that was echoed by the sea of blooming flowers.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/5/2023 8:44:00 PM
Lasaad, Thank you for your precious remarks, which inspire and delight. Blessings

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