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September 24, 2023

Contest : Unwritten Absence

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My heart enfolded the hued horizon of dazzling dawn, the yearning brush soaked the sunburst colors, painted a Monet garden blooming with my love, unfurled the facsimile of your floral face, adroitly adorned. The luring luster of lilac rose lined your lips, quivered with the cadence of the dancing dew. As rhapsody rippled in my heart’s mesmerized meadow, at the edge of stalled time I soared in euphoria, endlessly enchanted. In the velvet vale of my mind fashioned by fervor, I carved a charming channel of longing to reach you. The climbing cloud of my craving came down in a torrent, making my melodic love a meandering river, earnestly enthralled. The oasis of my mind one day dried in the desert, dripping cloud drenching the desiccated passion didn’t stay long, disappeared with the draft of the summer wind of discontent, as in the sand storm the dregs of divested desire drifted away, utterly unowned. The river of longing in my abandoned valley got lost, the fervent flowers I gave you withered in your vase, but your memory preserved some in perception, the ones you liked the most, amazingly adoring. When in the lonely hours they would appear apparently alive, take you to the valley of flower we had been together once, it was me they would then let you know, and allure you with my unwritten absence, eternally engraved.

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Date: 9/24/2023 9:43:00 PM
What a wonderful poem soaked with passion and longing, also with the excruciating pain over the uwritten absence of your dear one! You have every right to be at the top of the outstanding poets' list. Into my FAVE.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/25/2023 10:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your gracious visit, and I am overwhelmed by your comments. All your poems I read, enjoy and learn. Your choice of words is unique. Thank you for faving the poem.
Date: 9/24/2023 9:34:00 AM
Love the imagery and the energy of this passionate poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/25/2023 9:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Karen for your visit and for the encouraging comments.

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