Unwritten

The poem I never wrote is so majestic So supreme so dope not rhyme infested Winged white words are simple yet complex Causing maroon mind dimple hazel happiness This poem is bold and I am not A poem that grows in ones heart Like a yellow hope amethyst art Blessed by Holy Ghost so help me God The poem I never wrote is a celebration of poets I know like The Situation Who I watch from black back seat cream creativity Who my mind follows but in spirit we ALL lead The poem I never wrote was contest worthy An orange antidote to bad ideas absurdly It would fit the form and inspire the world to dream Promote peace love harmony humanity The poem I never wrote would never end It would slowly roll and despite my sins It would fly it would float and hearts it’d mend It would inspire truth and a fountain of youth In you my friend.

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Susan Manley

Date: 10/8/2023 9:43:00 PM

Take heed, I think that poem got wrote. It did inspire. It made me smile. And so I came to comment for a while. Never be in denial of the impact of what you wrote.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2023 11:07:00 PM

So kind of you to say Susan. Thanks

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/2/2023 9:48:00 AM

A creative and inspiring poem my friend.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/2/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thanks Jerry!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/1/2023 3:19:00 PM

So inspiring what you have rhymed in my soul! The poem not put in words, in black and white! The perfect one in our hearts and minds! The work of Art that remains between the layers of a dream.. an unattainable concept, imagery, simile and metaphor.. A message, a call conveyed in the finest of poetry and the wondrous of words! The poem! The one! I so much enjoyed and liked the depth of your poetry, Karen! A huge delight! God bless you. Best regards.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2023 3:34:00 PM

Ah it is so nice to be on the same page of understanding. Thank you for your words of affirmation and for your time in reading my poem Besma. May God bless you as well.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/1/2023 10:37:00 AM

That wii be written gorgeously, what is still unwritten. Blessings

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2023 10:43:00 AM

Hugs and blessing

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2023 5:42:00 AM

It would fly it would float and hearts it’d mend It would inspire truth and a fountain of youth In you my friend--well said and so inspiring, Karen. Poetry has that power.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2023 6:38:00 AM

Indeed. Thanks for being who you are as a poet of power. Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/1/2023 4:28:00 AM

a beautiful first write for October. I appreciate your poetic aspirations. I, too, sometimes yearn to write as others do. I allow them to inspire me yet am learning to develop my own voice, my own style so I can write the poem I've not yet 'wrote.' :-) a heartfelt creation....Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2023 4:39:00 AM

Thank you for your commentary. We owe it to our ancestors to bring forth our unique self in every poetic endeavor. You do that Sara and I aspire to. Hugs