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Unwritten

The poem I never wrote is so majestic
So supreme so dope not rhyme infested
Winged white words are simple yet complex
Causing maroon mind dimple hazel happiness

This poem is bold and I am not
A poem that grows in ones heart
Like a yellow hope amethyst art
Blessed by Holy Ghost so help me God

The poem I never wrote is a celebration
of poets I know like The Situation
Who I watch from black back seat cream creativity
Who my mind follows but in spirit we ALL lead

The poem I never wrote was contest worthy
An orange antidote to bad ideas absurdly
It would fit the form and inspire the world to dream
Promote peace love harmony humanity

The poem I never wrote would never end
It would slowly roll and despite my sins
It would fly it would float and hearts it’d mend
It would inspire truth and a fountain of youth
In you my friend.

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Susan Manley Date: 10/8/2023 9:43:00 PM Take heed, I think that poem got wrote. It did inspire. It made me smile. And so I came to comment for a while. Never be in denial of the impact of what you wrote. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/8/2023 11:07:00 PM So kind of you to say Susan. Thanks

Jerry Brotherton Date: 10/2/2023 9:48:00 AM A creative and inspiring poem my friend. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/2/2023 9:55:00 AM Thanks Jerry!

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2023 3:19:00 PM So inspiring what you have rhymed in my soul! The poem not put in words, in black and white! The perfect one in our hearts and minds! The work of Art that remains between the layers of a dream.. an unattainable concept, imagery, simile and metaphor.. A message, a call conveyed in the finest of poetry and the wondrous of words! The poem! The one! I so much enjoyed and liked the depth of your poetry, Karen! A huge delight! God bless you. Best regards. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 3:34:00 PM Ah it is so nice to be on the same page of understanding. Thank you for your words of affirmation and for your time in reading my poem Besma. May God bless you as well.

Anisha Dutta Date: 10/1/2023 10:37:00 AM That wii be written gorgeously, what is still unwritten. Blessings Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 10:43:00 AM Hugs and blessing

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/1/2023 5:42:00 AM It would fly it would float and hearts it’d mend It would inspire truth and a fountain of youth In you my friend--well said and so inspiring, Karen. Poetry has that power. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 6:38:00 AM Indeed. Thanks for being who you are as a poet of power. Hugs

Silent One Date: 10/1/2023 2:33:00 AM I can see your point in your poem... but if you look around us, everything is poetry and it has been created by God... Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 2:39:00 AM Agreed!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/1/2023 1:20:00 AM Dear Karen we always dream of writing the perfect poem. Who knows, with practice you can do it. Good luck. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 1:22:00 AM No only God can do it. You can't pour pure liquid from a dirty cup. lol Hugs dear poet Victor!

Quoth Theraven Date: 10/1/2023 1:16:00 AM Karen, Who can ever tell, the poem you almost wrote, spoken so well. -Richard Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/1/2023 1:21:00 AM Quoth TheRaven thanks so much.