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U or V Words Contest sponsored by Constance La France

~ August 11, 2023 

Unwritten

"If you cannot glean my poetry I will explain, but do not ask 
me to reveal what I've left unwritten between my lines."      
                                                                             ~ by poet

There are scarlet secrets, glimpses of my soul I dare not confide
Tears flowing as crimson trickles, my bleeding heart can't hide
Tete-a-tete conversations will never be leaked from my quill
Too personal, they'll remain unwritten. A promise I must fulfill.

I have scribed what my heart feels; or felt. It's anguish, pain,
sorrow of love lost, weeping beneath dark clouds of disdain.
I have doting recollections of days when I had no inhibitions
and nights of making love, but details I'll not note in admissions.

Emotions linger, echoes in my mind, whispers in plaintive groan
Reflections of my life that will forever be confined as my own
Sentiments spoken in interludes; a rendezvous with a love in tryst
Unscripted in my poetry, for I shall not reveal the depth of a kiss.

I allude to feelings of falling in love that made the earth shake
but I'll not divulge the intimate aspects of sorrow and heartache.
I'd never proclaim my unwritten words to be labeled 'divine'
They're destined to be clandestine. I will not share any of mine.

I don't need a whetstone to sharpen my affectionate memories
I won't narrate words in Sonnets as if composed for melodies
of private moments. It's not on a whim this vow I have taken
but a promise that I made to myself, and it will not be forsaken.

I'll never expose what was said to make my cheeks blush pink
There will be no scribbles on parchment when I thirst for a drink
of the nectar shared with the few I've loved and was smitten.
Troth of discretion, my evocative confessions remain unwritten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 10:46 AM
- Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Lin - hugs
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. Hugs back to you.
Kauffman Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Lin, congratulations on your win! You have highlighted one of the essential parts of poetry - the meaning between the lines to be discovered through contemplation and deep thought. I love your imagery that moves your lines along in a smooth flow like liquid satin! Blessings to you and your talented pen!
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so very much for such detailed reviews you offer me, Sam. I am always in awe of your supportive thoughts.
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 11:44 AM
dropping back with many congrats on your win Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Thanks for returning with your congrats Jan ;-)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful "Unwritten" write/quote/picture. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a great day................
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Thank you for your congrats, Paula and I enjoy the many comments you leave for my poetry.
Seeker Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Indeed, the deepest secrets remain buried in the cave of our heart. Warmest congratulations on your win, Lin
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:53 AM
In a cherished place is where they belong. Thanks so much for your thoughts, Seeker.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 2:33 PM
IT"S really good to capture emotions along with well crafted rhyming, Lin . Big congrats on number one win.
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Thank you so very much, Andrea.
Kitchin Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Lin, back to congratulate you on your first place win!
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:52 AM
I'm so happy this one rated so high on the list, and thank you for returning, Tania!
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Some things are best left to the reader's interpretation and we have to read between the lines my friend :-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:42 AM
True, Jan, and then there are times when I leave no hint between the lines as to the depth of my sorrow or happiness. Thanks for your thoughts.
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Lin, a beautiful emotive poem.
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Thanks so much, Tania.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 11:17 AM
No need to put all one’s secrets into a poem Lin, although it’s surprising how much we subliminally do, main thing is to put one’s heart into whatever we write, and believe me you do, another top poem from you, and a great entry for the contest, cheers David
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Your insight reaches beyond what most others see in my poetry. David, I'm never surprised by your comments, just grateful for them. Thank you.
Narain Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Nice poem. Personal secrets are treasures which stay valuable with the person,
Lane Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:38 AM
As they should. Thank you, Jay.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Secrets of the heart are not for sharing, they must stay unknown for those secrets are yours and yours alone. A wonderful write Lin… Belle
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Dear Belle. Your insight mirrors mine. I am very grateful for your sincere comments. Thank you.
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