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U or V Words Contest sponsored by Constance La France

~ August 11, 2023 

"If you cannot glean my poetry I will explain, but do not ask me to reveal what I've left unwritten between my lines." ~ by poet There are scarlet secrets, glimpses of my soul I dare not confide Tears flowing as crimson trickles, my bleeding heart can't hide Tete-a-tete conversations will never be leaked from my quill Too personal, they'll remain unwritten. A promise I must fulfill. I have scribed what my heart feels; or felt. It's anguish, pain, sorrow of love lost, weeping beneath dark clouds of disdain. I have doting recollections of days when I had no inhibitions and nights of making love, but details I'll not note in admissions. Emotions linger, echoes in my mind, whispers in plaintive groan Reflections of my life that will forever be confined as my own Sentiments spoken in interludes; a rendezvous with a love in tryst Unscripted in my poetry, for I shall not reveal the depth of a kiss. I allude to feelings of falling in love that made the earth shake but I'll not divulge the intimate aspects of sorrow and heartache. I'd never proclaim my unwritten words to be labeled 'divine' They're destined to be clandestine. I will not share any of mine. I don't need a whetstone to sharpen my affectionate memories I won't narrate words in Sonnets as if composed for melodies of private moments. It's not on a whim this vow I have taken but a promise that I made to myself, and it will not be forsaken. I'll never expose what was said to make my cheeks blush pink There will be no scribbles on parchment when I thirst for a drink of the nectar shared with the few I've loved and was smitten. Troth of discretion, my evocative confessions remain unwritten.

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Date: 8/16/2023 10:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Lin - hugs
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Date: 8/16/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. Hugs back to you.
Date: 8/14/2023 12:21:00 PM
Lin, congratulations on your win! You have highlighted one of the essential parts of poetry - the meaning between the lines to be discovered through contemplation and deep thought. I love your imagery that moves your lines along in a smooth flow like liquid satin! Blessings to you and your talented pen!
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Date: 8/16/2023 11:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much for such detailed reviews you offer me, Sam. I am always in awe of your supportive thoughts.
Date: 8/14/2023 11:44:00 AM
dropping back with many congrats on your win Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2023 11:56:00 AM
Thanks for returning with your congrats Jan ;-)
Date: 8/14/2023 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful "Unwritten" write/quote/picture. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a great day................
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Date: 8/14/2023 11:55:00 AM
Thank you for your congrats, Paula and I enjoy the many comments you leave for my poetry.
Date: 8/14/2023 7:30:00 AM
Indeed, the deepest secrets remain buried in the cave of our heart. Warmest congratulations on your win, Lin
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:53:00 AM
In a cherished place is where they belong. Thanks so much for your thoughts, Seeker.
Date: 8/13/2023 2:33:00 PM
IT"S really good to capture emotions along with well crafted rhyming, Lin . Big congrats on number one win.
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:52:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Andrea.
Date: 8/13/2023 2:09:00 PM
Lin, back to congratulate you on your first place win!
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:52:00 AM
I'm so happy this one rated so high on the list, and thank you for returning, Tania!
Date: 8/13/2023 5:58:00 AM
Some things are best left to the reader's interpretation and we have to read between the lines my friend :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:42:00 AM
True, Jan, and then there are times when I leave no hint between the lines as to the depth of my sorrow or happiness. Thanks for your thoughts.
Date: 8/12/2023 4:29:00 AM
Lin, a beautiful emotive poem.
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tania.
Date: 8/11/2023 11:17:00 AM
No need to put all one’s secrets into a poem Lin, although it’s surprising how much we subliminally do, main thing is to put one’s heart into whatever we write, and believe me you do, another top poem from you, and a great entry for the contest, cheers David
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:40:00 AM
Your insight reaches beyond what most others see in my poetry. David, I'm never surprised by your comments, just grateful for them. Thank you.
Date: 8/11/2023 9:56:00 AM
Nice poem. Personal secrets are treasures which stay valuable with the person,
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:38:00 AM
As they should. Thank you, Jay.
Date: 8/11/2023 9:30:00 AM
Secrets of the heart are not for sharing, they must stay unknown for those secrets are yours and yours alone. A wonderful write Lin… Belle
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Date: 8/11/2023 9:53:00 AM
Dear Belle. Your insight mirrors mine. I am very grateful for your sincere comments. Thank you.

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