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Unwinding

A choice presents itself: to wind the strings of memory around my longing state, or find the breathless candle at the end of a long corridor of time that still keeps faith with light, that will invite a dream to weave its wisdom, seize my mind and not its melancholy, where the riches are. There is some comfort, wallowing among the callow simpering of tender angst but it is temporal, its stumbling quest will slumber fitfully, its rest in vain. There is that candle, with its strength bestowed in peace—its blazing fire of love fair strowed upon a cosmic heart, outrageous in its pretense to be frail. It has become a flame transcendent in its zeal for change, and as we watch the self it is no more indulgence of the past, but in its place, a gracious gathering of an eternal now. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/19/2012 5:26:00 AM
two things leap out at me from this one (and your others) 1. your extensive vocabulary and 2. the way your words blend so well, each line flowing with ease into the next; alas, your train of thought sometimes completely loses me! I must be rather dense lol btw I read your "3 goofs" in the comment box and replied - did you know you can edit or delete comments you've made? smiles coming your way today :-)
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/19/2012 8:17:00 AM
Charlotte, most people are lost by my work! I tried to edit, but could not find an option for it. I know there is one--somewhere. (You'll not have difficulty, though, in understanding my entry for today. :-) Please have a look)
Date: 7/18/2012 1:47:00 PM
wow! very complex and intriguing but i think it's very perceptive and smart. there is "comfort" in "wallowing" in "tender angst" but it takes courage to keep going towards that candle. very nice!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/18/2012 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene

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