Unwinding

A choice presents itself: to wind the strings 
of memory around my longing state,
or find the breathless candle at the end
of a long corridor of time that still
keeps faith with light, that will invite a dream
to weave its wisdom, seize my mind and not
its melancholy, where the riches are.

There is some comfort, wallowing among
the callow simpering of tender angst
but it is temporal,  its stumbling quest
will slumber fitfully, its rest in vain.
There is that candle, with its strength bestowed
in peace—its blazing fire of love fair strowed
upon a cosmic heart, outrageous in
its pretense to be frail.

It has become a flame transcendent in
its zeal for change, and as we watch the self
it is no more indulgence of the past,
but in its place, a gracious gathering 
of an eternal now.
                   ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/19/2012 5:26:00 AM
two things leap out at me from this one (and your others) 1. your extensive vocabulary and 2. the way your words blend so well, each line flowing with ease into the next; alas, your train of thought sometimes completely loses me! I must be rather dense lol btw I read your "3 goofs" in the comment box and replied - did you know you can edit or delete comments you've made? smiles coming your way today :-)
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Date: 7/19/2012 8:17:00 AM
Charlotte, most people are lost by my work! I tried to edit, but could not find an option for it. I know there is one--somewhere. (You'll not have difficulty, though, in understanding my entry for today. :-) Please have a look)
Date: 7/18/2012 1:47:00 PM
wow! very complex and intriguing but i think it's very perceptive and smart. there is "comfort" in "wallowing" in "tender angst" but it takes courage to keep going towards that candle. very nice!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/18/2012 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene
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