Unwellness In Railway View

Unwellness in Railway View
(An Addingham poem)

It was not just the flickering ember
that lit the way to one’s damp musty bed
nor sash cord window panes I remember
stamped with willow patterns of frosty shred,
but the vile grotesque shadows that followed
created on walls of chalk distemper
that drove along shivers standing hair on head.
Bereft of childhood in those haunting days
where tiny feet scurried yet feared to tread
on staid stone slabs that lay on earthen floor
caused an array of warped winter ailments
a Wharfedale river cough a throaty caw.
But apparitions they ne’er go away
serves up the moment every single day.

     © Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 12:07 PM
hey, Harry, I keep clicking on your recent poems and I think I am all caught up. probably on the older ones too. haha! Hope you are having a great day!
Flaherty Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 1:45 PM
Walls of chalk distemper Wonderwall
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January 8, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Shadows on the walls are frightening, in days of old it must have scary for the kids apart from all they had to put up with. No hot running water, tin baths, no central heating, lino on the floors, I remember some of all this although when I was young the days of no electricity were over. Enjoyed the read Harry ~ Belle
Downing  Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Yeah, I still wonder what was i saw back then when i was 8years old. Still buckles me and gives me chills...LOL! Awesome write, Harry :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Yes, times were worse several generations back. I don't know how some families made it but they did. Sometimes the man of the house drank or gambled or both all his funds away. Sometimes there were so many children. Sometimes there was abuse. It had to be hard lives for so many poverty ridden people. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 6:56 AM
An excellent sonnet, Harry. I can 'feel' the conditions in which people lived back then. I think it was about 5 or 6 years ago that you had another very expressive poem inspired by Addingham. ~ Wishing you all the best for 2021. // paul
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 7:03 AM
I've been back looking for the poem which I mentioned above, but can't find it; must have read it somewhere else. Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Makes me think of walking home alone when I was a kid. All the trees looked like they were reaching for me. Another masterful piece my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 4:18 AM
Wow! I used to watch Dark Shadows. Flickering embers, willow patterns of frosty shred, a throaty caw. Haunting indeed! Love it, Harry!
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:50 PM
Like Michael down here, I too envisioned a haunted or miserable soul like from Grapes of Wrath. this is a very nicely composed sonnet, my friend. Did I wish you happy new years yet? I sure do hope it will be better than last year.
Sands Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 7:05 AM
This is powerful and so well written Harry. The memory of apparitions, stands out to me. A poem that calls to be re-read. Excellent :)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:40 AM
A lovely sonnet. So full of inspiration in your writing... God B L E S S you
Buhagiar Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:57 PM
Beautiful write, with just about the right amount of alliteration. The emotion is so vivid here. Wishing you a Happy New Year.
Tor Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Harry a time an era that some poor souls faced. When I read this I thought of the movie with Henry Fonda, The Grapes Of Wrath. It was a hard life surrounded by a dust and no hope for hungry families struggling. Perfect words you have penned here my friend...
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:02 PM
WoW! This brings up visions of poverty stricken families living in hard environments and fathers working long hours for little pay. Cold shanties for a home with little to keep out the cold. A sad picture. Well written though with excellent imagery. God Bless, JB Sorry I've been gone so long. Was feeling ill and dizzy spells and nausea for some time. Finally the pain was so great I called in sick. Ended up in E.R. with ruptured appendix. Two weeks in hospital. Now home and getting stronger.
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Great imagery you created with details of un-wellness in your hues. Well done, Harry. Wishing you the very best in 2021.
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