Unwelcome

The store was most inviting
With its various antiques,
The kind of place for browsing
That a retro-lover seeks.

I stopped in on a Sunday
But I didn’t stay for long,
For the music that was blasting
Was a real religious song.

Now the owner makes her choices
Based on what she likes to hear
And she joined in on the chorus
In a voice both loud and clear.

Yet I think consideration
To the shoppers should be paid.
If the radio played country
(Not my thing), I would have stayed.

Had this happened close to Christmas
Maybe I’d have been prepared,
But I wasn’t, so I left and
I could tell nobody cared.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 10:47 PM
I have left stores before due to blasting music, - some offensive, some just plain too loud! I never understand why the shop stewards do not realize why I am fleeing. like you I think they "do not care"
Slaughter Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 10:29 AM
I'm in full agreement, Ilene. Certain music genres certainly do add to or detract from my shopping enjoyment.
Rigoler Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 11:05 AM
Certain music in public places (like like rap in supermarkets) is totally out of place. When I hear it I shop as fast as I can to get out of that environment. At a local hospital recently for a test, the nurses (mostly in their 20s I guesstimated) were playing music typical for their ages and not at all conducive to old patients in beds nearby! I had to assume those nurses were blind and deaf! / Maurice
Kaufman Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 2:53 AM
Hi Ilene, I enjoyed this poem. I now live in a smaller more rural area than previously in Maryland where there are absolutely kind and wonderful people but the majority did not go to college and are not world-traveled. I am of the same mindset as you that we are a multicultural world of various religious beliefs and that especially in public settings we should remain neutral and open to accommodate all.
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 7:18 PM
You must have moved to Indiana or something, Ilene! ~ Rod Serling
Situation Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 6:11 PM
You make life an art with your rhyming. I know it takes effort and for this I commend you. Wish others would use you as an example.
Rolland Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 2:21 PM
you did the right choice for you, no matter what others think, thanks for the original poem
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