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The store was most inviting With its various antiques, The kind of place for browsing That a retro-lover seeks. I stopped in on a Sunday But I didn’t stay for long, For the music that was blasting Was a real religious song. Now the owner makes her choices Based on what she likes to hear And she joined in on the chorus In a voice both loud and clear. Yet I think consideration To the shoppers should be paid. If the radio played country (Not my thing), I would have stayed. Had this happened close to Christmas Maybe I’d have been prepared, But I wasn’t, so I left and I could tell nobody cared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/16/2023 10:47:00 PM
I have left stores before due to blasting music, - some offensive, some just plain too loud! I never understand why the shop stewards do not realize why I am fleeing. like you I think they "do not care"
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Date: 8/12/2023 10:29:00 AM
I'm in full agreement, Ilene. Certain music genres certainly do add to or detract from my shopping enjoyment.
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Date: 8/11/2023 11:05:00 AM
Certain music in public places (like like rap in supermarkets) is totally out of place. When I hear it I shop as fast as I can to get out of that environment. At a local hospital recently for a test, the nurses (mostly in their 20s I guesstimated) were playing music typical for their ages and not at all conducive to old patients in beds nearby! I had to assume those nurses were blind and deaf! / Maurice
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Date: 8/10/2023 2:53:00 AM
Hi Ilene, I enjoyed this poem. I now live in a smaller more rural area than previously in Maryland where there are absolutely kind and wonderful people but the majority did not go to college and are not world-traveled. I am of the same mindset as you that we are a multicultural world of various religious beliefs and that especially in public settings we should remain neutral and open to accommodate all.
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Date: 8/9/2023 7:18:00 PM
You must have moved to Indiana or something, Ilene! ~ Rod Serling
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Date: 8/9/2023 6:11:00 PM
You make life an art with your rhyming. I know it takes effort and for this I commend you. Wish others would use you as an example.
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Date: 8/9/2023 2:21:00 PM
you did the right choice for you, no matter what others think, thanks for the original poem
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