Ann Foster Poet Free verse

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Unwanted Things

Unwanted Things.

A car wreck.
A kid, unexpected.
An absent father to be.
 
A cheater that brought you, 
a sudden health risk. 
A divorce.

Car troubles.
Work issues.
Financial burdens. 
Bad health, 
that effects you, 
and…
or…
those you love.

These are a few, 
of my un-favorite
things.
There is no song, 
about these, 
by Julie…
although I read her story, 
and she
had a hard life
too.

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Jeff Connelly November 23, 2019 at 6:04 PM Ann your last few submissions have been quite heavy in wording not weight. May i ask who is "Julie"??? Jeff Connelly November 24, 2019 at 5:48 AM Oh I should have got that one. Ann Foster November 23, 2019 at 6:46 PM Julie Andrews... Spoon full of sugar... :)

Lindsay Laurie November 23, 2019 at 5:39 PM Hello Ann … You had me thinking my own 'unwanted things' from my past and sure enough, your verse has a lot of me in it, but I guess life is a bit like a rollercoaster ride. Thank you Ann - Lindsay

Bobby May November 23, 2019 at 2:20 PM Ann, we all have them it's all about how you deal with them, I myself look at those who are worse off then me, then I see how lucky I am to have two arms to write or two legs to walk, SEE!! now smile my sweet friend!! I love ya poetry Sis!! Ann Foster November 23, 2019 at 3:53 PM Ty so kindly. Just melancholy today. It will pass. Need to work on holiday poems and change the fabric of the day. Have such a nice afternoon. Flowers and bright bugs that sing... humming happy... Ann

Quoth Theraven November 23, 2019 at 2:19 PM Ann, Feeling it from these 'Unwanted Things' in your poem. Entangled photograph in black & white. Where could this be(?) Surely not Julie's mountain top in song. -Richard Ann Foster November 23, 2019 at 3:52 PM You are ever so kind. Thank you. Ann

Sandra Adams November 23, 2019 at 1:28 PM there are many unwanted things in life we wish we could disregard ...this one provoked thoughts...good write... hugs Ann Foster November 23, 2019 at 1:33 PM thank you. I try not to dwell in the darkness... but thoughts wander and mus be led back... sometimes... have a truly blessed day my friend. God give you a miracle.... Ann