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U nable to understand what more I could have done N othing holding back, I gave all to make us one W ith every breath I whispered, "My love is true." A ll I gave, and all I asked for was YOU N ow I know, you just took me for a fool T ook my heart, my soul; I was just...a tool E very day I wonder why by your face I'm haunted D oubtless it's because, I want so to be wanted!!! For Freddie Vassalo's Unwanted Contest November 6, 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2015 9:26:00 PM

That's amazingly beautiful dear sweet Eileen.. always love ur way with words.. Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2015 8:34:00 PM

I'm glad to see this one won, Eileen. BIG congrats on a clever job for this theme!

James Inman

Date: 11/7/2015 6:09:00 PM

Great write write and well done Acrostic. Sad!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/7/2015 6:05:00 PM

I can relate to this fine acrostic, but who cannot? I see you've got a placement in the contest - well deserved! Congrats(: Always, Laura

Michael Tor

Date: 11/7/2015 4:42:00 PM

A wonderful write and a well deserved win Eileen enjoyed reading and congratulations!

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 3:20:00 PM

Amazing, Eileen, Congrats on your win in Freddie's contest. SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 11/7/2015 3:16:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/7/2015 1:22:00 PM

Love your write, Eileen, congratulation on a well deserved win. Hugs dear freind

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/7/2015 1:10:00 PM

So beautifully written, Eileen, in this difficult form. Congratulations on your nice win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/7/2015 10:03:00 AM

This is a difficult form, and you were able to express so well the heartbreak of someone who feels unwanted, Eileen! Well done!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:28:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit, Carrie. It is much appreciated, dear.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/7/2015 9:20:00 AM

Eileen, this is a very expressive, well-written acrostic. Congratulations Janice

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:26:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Janice. Very kind of you to visit.

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/7/2015 9:03:00 AM

A beautiful and smooth flow from one line to the next. Had there not been a space after the first letter, I wouldn't have noticed the form as acrostic. Congrats, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:45:00 AM

Thank you, dear. I'm so glad that you liked it. Somehow I feel the need to do that. I don't know why. :) Maybe I will refrain from doing it next time. Hugs

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/7/2015 8:41:00 AM

Wow Eileen, powerfully written. Thank you for sharing and congrats on your win. May your heart find a song that leads to gladness...a fullfiment within your heart.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:46:00 AM

Thanks, Ed. I was glad I could write something for this contest. :) I'm glad Freddie liked it. Your post is very kind and sweet. Blessings.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/7/2015 8:19:00 AM

An arrow of poetry heading towards an indifferent heart is a wasted arrow! When one gives his/her all and gets nothing in return then, not even a superb poem as this one is able to change the course of events! A seven for poetic expression and content, dear Eileen! Good luck!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:47:00 AM

You are so correct in what you say, dear poet. Nothing can arouse love if it is not existent in the heart. I'm glad I could write for this contest. Thanks so much for your visit. Blessings.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/7/2015 7:21:00 AM

Sadly some people lack the capacity to fully give of themselves. You have expressed eloquently how that feels. Congratulations on your win.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:48:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Richard. Your work was superb, and I really thought that I'd see it there at the top. Hugs to you, dear.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/7/2015 7:10:00 AM

Elieen,this is a well written acrostic. You have skilfully expressed the feeling of being unwanted. Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:50:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Alexis. I'm so pleased with your visit. :) I'm glad that the poem did well. It was a last minute entry. Hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 11/6/2015 4:51:00 PM

All so true, Eileen...some of us are givers.. and some are takers. This is wonderful

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:54:00 AM

Yes, dear. I know all about being a giver. Not easy to live that way....but I don't know any other way to live. Thanks for the visit, dear.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2015 4:49:00 PM

Think many of us can relate to this Eileen:-( hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:55:00 AM

Yes, dear. I'm glad I could write for the contest and do well. It isn't an easy topic to write on. Hope all is well with you. Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 11/6/2015 4:12:00 PM

Lovely acrostic Eileen. I have had these thoughts.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2015 10:56:00 AM

I'm so sorry that you have, Tim. To love and be loved in return is a blessing. Love is hardly ever 100% reciprocal. It has degrees and levels...Thank you for your visit.