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Unusual Summer

Walking along a dusty path, no children In the park. 112 degrees in the shade and no birds or squirrels around only the chirping of insects can be heard. Grass and weeds gasping drowning in heat while the tree leaves curl up to protect themselves. Park benches like griddles on a stove, their green paint shriveling and peeling. Not a breath of air just wavy images dancing in the distance. Weather forecast calls for more of the same warning us not to venture outside and to drink plenty of water. Restrictions against watering. The yellow smiling sun looking down pointing its rays at us like saying, ‘you are to blame’.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/10/2018 9:40:00 AM
You have described this so well Carlos. Great one :)
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Date: 9/11/2018 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 9/9/2018 9:05:00 PM
Wow! Carlos, your shining verses shimmer off the page in heat waves that perfectly sets the stage for the great impact of your last stunning line; 'The yellow smiling sun looking down pointing its rays at us like saying, 'you are to blame'. A tremendous line with a keen edge and a powerful end to your fantastic piece.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:25:00 AM
Susan, your response in itself is a prose not unlike your writes. Thank you.
Date: 9/3/2018 3:20:00 AM
Nicely written, you can almost feel the heat and shimmer of it !
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 9/3/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thanks for visiting Maxie.

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