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fire spreads quickly animals scurry to safety red rose untouched Haiku Wannabe contest Trillinea O first attempt at this form. I could not find on the soup so I labeled it as a Haiku.

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Date: 6/12/2013 3:56:00 PM
Nice write...Congrats on your win,dear friend..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 6:28:00 PM
Thanks A.O you are always so encouraging.
Date: 6/11/2013 7:37:00 PM
Try always for the less used image, think out of the box, there is another use for the word rose, [pinecones explode/ as pitch ignites orange flames rose/ the land erodes] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2013 8:33:00 AM
Please forgive my comment, for some reason your comment rubbed me the wrong way. I know that was not your intention so I would like to take back my comment.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 6:39:00 PM
I find it ironic that you would use the phrase think outside of the box as a way for me to be more innovative. It must be the most overused phrase in the English language, every time I hear it I want to gag.
Date: 6/11/2013 12:42:00 AM
hey, I LIKE how you got the rose reference in there. Good work!! wish I could think something up for this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/11/2013 6:55:00 AM
I am sure you will.
Date: 6/10/2013 2:25:00 AM
Well done, and I wish you all the best for the contest! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/10/2013 6:53:00 AM
Thanks Kate
Date: 6/10/2013 12:50:00 AM
Nice that the fire was kind enough to at least not harm the rose! If this was your first haiku, it's much better than my first attempt! It's quite imaginative...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/10/2013 6:53:00 AM
It is a trillinea O 4/8/4. I have never heard of the form but it was one of the options available for Debbie's contest.
Date: 6/9/2013 8:31:00 PM
:) Good luck on the contest with this lovely write, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2013 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 6/9/2013 2:33:00 PM
- Beautiful, Richard! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2013 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise.