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Untouched

fire spreads quickly animals scurry to safety red rose untouched Haiku Wannabe contest Trillinea O first attempt at this form. I could not find on the soup so I labeled it as a Haiku.

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/12/2013 3:56:00 PM

Nice write...Congrats on your win,dear friend..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 6:28:00 PM

Thanks A.O you are always so encouraging.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2013 7:37:00 PM

Try always for the less used image, think out of the box, there is another use for the word rose, [pinecones explode/ as pitch ignites orange flames rose/ the land erodes] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2013 8:33:00 AM

Please forgive my comment, for some reason your comment rubbed me the wrong way. I know that was not your intention so I would like to take back my comment.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 6:39:00 PM

I find it ironic that you would use the phrase think outside of the box as a way for me to be more innovative. It must be the most overused phrase in the English language, every time I hear it I want to gag.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2013 12:42:00 AM

hey, I LIKE how you got the rose reference in there. Good work!! wish I could think something up for this one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/11/2013 6:55:00 AM

I am sure you will.

Kate Wilderson

Date: 6/10/2013 2:25:00 AM

Well done, and I wish you all the best for the contest! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/10/2013 6:53:00 AM

Thanks Kate

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/10/2013 12:50:00 AM

Nice that the fire was kind enough to at least not harm the rose! If this was your first haiku, it's much better than my first attempt! It's quite imaginative...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/10/2013 6:53:00 AM

It is a trillinea O 4/8/4. I have never heard of the form but it was one of the options available for Debbie's contest.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/9/2013 8:31:00 PM

:) Good luck on the contest with this lovely write, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2013 8:39:00 PM

Thanks Eileen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2013 2:33:00 PM

- Beautiful, Richard! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2013 2:47:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise.