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Untold

Untold are the steps I would take, How many more will lead me to redemption? I only go through a door, I don’t know the mileage. Untold is the turbulent waters I'll wade through, Where do I meet the shore? My feet are at their best, Hope is my propeller. Untold is the dark skies overhanging, My thoughts push through the gloom, Anticipating the radiant room, When will I bask in a season of light? Untold is my sojourn, When do I get to the tranquil region? I see signposts, It’s an aerial view. Untold is the seething cauldron, When will it be pacified? The ambience is stifling, I seek the serene stream. April 18, 2023. Writing Challenge - 'U' Words - Poetry Contest, Constance La France.

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Date: 4/19/2023 12:40:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Thompson :) - A great poem :) - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. It's an honour.
Date: 4/19/2023 9:57:00 AM
Hi Thompson, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. It's an honour.
Date: 4/19/2023 6:48:00 AM
Thompson, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Very nice !
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. I'm honoured.
Date: 4/18/2023 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Thompson
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Thompson Emate
Date: 4/18/2023 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, Alfonso. I'm honoured.
Date: 4/18/2023 7:24:00 PM
Nice one Thompson. So many questions without definitive answers. Congratulations your win! :)
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. It's an honour.

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