Untold

Untold tears
as helpless, I watch
you, the one who was my world,
slowly, slowly slip away,
knowing that someday soon
yours will be yet another photograph
that I talk to...

deathfree verse

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joe Maverick

June 5, 2023 at 10:34 PM

Thoughts to ponder in your words i feel such Watching the world now Jack. All the best to you.'

Alexis Y.

April 19, 2023 at 8:56 AM

Hi Jack, You penned such a touching and poignant write. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Constance La France

April 19, 2023 at 6:10 AM

Jack, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Emotional, beautiful and truly touched my heart !

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 19, 2023 at 2:09 AM

- "Untold tears" ... touching poem, Jack - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

April 18, 2023 at 8:37 PM

"yours will be yet another photograph that I talk to" - Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

April 18, 2023 at 6:39 PM

Oh Jack. Sorrow in your words but a great poem. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sara Kendrick

April 18, 2023 at 2:36 PM

Ahh!! Sad one that you have penned. I know this is a hard time for you now. Thanks for sharing this emotive and expressive one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara