Untold

Untold tears
as helpless, I watch
you, the one who was my world,
slowly, slowly slip away,
knowing that someday soon
yours will be yet another photograph
that I talk to...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 6/5/2023 10:34:00 PM
Thoughts to ponder in your words i feel such Watching the world now Jack. All the best to you.'
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:56:00 AM
Hi Jack, You penned such a touching and poignant write. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:10:00 AM
Jack, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Emotional, beautiful and truly touched my heart !
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:09:00 AM
- "Untold tears" ... touching poem, Jack - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:37:00 PM
"yours will be yet another photograph that I talk to" - Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/18/2023 6:39:00 PM
Oh Jack. Sorrow in your words but a great poem. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/18/2023 2:36:00 PM
Ahh!! Sad one that you have penned. I know this is a hard time for you now. Thanks for sharing this emotive and expressive one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/17/2023 4:56:00 AM
Those last two lines particularly poignant…
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