Untold

Untold tears as helpless, I watch you, the one who was my world, slowly, slowly slip away, knowing that someday soon yours will be yet another photograph that I talk to...

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/5/2023 10:34:00 PM

Thoughts to ponder in your words i feel such Watching the world now Jack. All the best to you.'

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2023 8:56:00 AM

Hi Jack, You penned such a touching and poignant write. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 4/19/2023 6:10:00 AM

Jack, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Emotional, beautiful and truly touched my heart !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2023 2:09:00 AM

- "Untold tears" ... touching poem, Jack - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2023 8:37:00 PM

"yours will be yet another photograph that I talk to" - Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/18/2023 6:39:00 PM

Oh Jack. Sorrow in your words but a great poem. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2023 2:36:00 PM

Ahh!! Sad one that you have penned. I know this is a hard time for you now. Thanks for sharing this emotive and expressive one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/17/2023 4:56:00 AM

Those last two lines particularly poignant…