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Unto Me

What shall thyself do? When the night mourns thy selfless brew And shall call upon thee As for soon, ye shall see The blackened eyes of death That lingers past the baby’s breath That shall grow upon thy future grave And ye cannot soulfully save Thyself upon thee Of all the things That ye hath done unto me ~~~ Contain thyself As ye shall make a fall Into the arms of Hell And under all demons' claws For the horrid crime Of that against love That ye hath done unto me ~~~ But, O, what a torturous lapsing hand! That makes me burrow upon the ocean sand And turned the sour grin of the devil upside down That left him to cry upon thy grave Onto which in time I shall lay That ye hath done unto me ~~~ As I yet wait upon the calling year Of angels to whisper into my troubled ear That all hath been a dream Of the awakening smile of thee But can not one Turn thy events undone That ye hath done unto me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/5/2008 6:17:00 PM
Alyssa - Congratulations on your featured write this week! Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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Date: 12/2/2008 3:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2008 4:55:00 PM
Yikes! Thy writing is so completely awesome! Congrats Alyssa on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/1/2008 11:46:00 AM
A bit chilling--the effect I'm sure you were after with the vivid imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing! Karen
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Date: 12/1/2008 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations Alyssa, on this sweet Write, "Unto Me" being featured. Vince
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Date: 12/1/2008 1:41:00 AM
Dear heart, I remember this beautiful poem from way back when you first posted it and it made it to the semi-finals. An absolute masterpiece in my books. Have you entered it in Kristin's contest? Elaine
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Date: 11/30/2008 10:41:00 PM
Alyssa beautiful poem with excellent penmanship - Congratulations on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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