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Untitled - About the Question Why

why are you weeping because I am a willow must you remain so (13 words) 23 May 2017

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Darren White

Date: 5/23/2017 7:35:00 AM

question not especially for this senryu: why do some of your poems start with "untitled?" The senryu made me smile, it is a sad humorous little poem. And is is a senku, or a hairyu.

Darren White
Date: 5/23/2017 7:56:00 AM

Yes, it is, thank you.

J-Mag Guthrie
Date: 5/23/2017 7:43:00 AM

There is no senku option in the drop-down list :( -- it does not have a title-- but if I called all my untitled poems simply "untitled" it would create confusion so I describe them in their thread titles. I think of it as the thread title rather than the poem title. Is that clearer?