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cool long green carpet walking bare foot through the grass ticks hungrily wait

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2025 1:38:00 PM

- Loves walking barefoot through the grass in the summer... but doesn't like ticks ... great, Haiku, Oliver :) -

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/7/2025 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I live in an area of the US that has a high tick concentration and I have already had a case of Lyme disease.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/7/2025 12:26:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write. Need a name for it??? How about "Green Grass" or "Green Carpet"??? Have a fun day as you write away..................

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/7/2025 12:29:00 PM

Glad you liked this one Paula. I live in an area of high tick concentration and have had a bout of Lyme disease. No, thanks any way but I try to write traditional Haiku which is untitled. Best