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Hello, This is obviously the first time that I have written a poem as I’m sure you will all be able to tell. I just need an outlet and wanted to try something new. Please give me your honest feedback. As I stated into the deep blue ocean, My truth was finally awoken. As waves are briskly brushing, I realise I am nothing. I am used. I am broken. I am powerless. I am hated. I am gullible, always vulnerable. Always Weak. Your voice, your whisper impaled my ear, I am now forever in fear. Depressive episodes never far in the distance, You ruined my confident, joyful exsistance. As the day draws to a close, I always take a huge dose. The pain, it numbs My mood, it brightens. Overdose will always be a fear, Though not as much as knowing you are near. Thank you for reading, Please provide feedback below. Zachary Phoenix