Adam Wayne Mackay Poet Free verse

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Wondering what im here for 
Life's so ominous
So random and tough
I scribe my lines
Thinking im meant to be a writer
I've lost everything 
Used to have a great job
But all had to be lost 
So I could build something better
I have to do it myself
Determination
Hard work
Honour 
Success
Gratify
Satisfy
For the first time in my life
I strive to accomplish
A goal I've set
I've never done that before
Its time
Put myself on the line
Failure
Or a celebrated moment
In the end ill know
Its one 
Or the other 
A curtain
Slowly
Rising
Beginning
The 
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Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2015 at 3:33 AM - A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Adam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A October 2, 2015 at 11:28 AM Adam, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A October 2, 2015 at 9:56 AM Adam WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Constance La France October 2, 2015 at 8:26 AM Adam, I really enjoyed reading your poem, it was full of pride and determination and deep emotion, well done, a 7 rating from me, and I want to welcome you to Poetry Soup, enjoy the journey, I am from Canada also, Ottawa, Ontario ~~