Untill the Day I Die

my love is the wind
it carries your name to the ear.

it whispers things in the breeze
while blowing the flowers i planted for you
it whips the chocolates, you gave me
and carries the scent to thee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 4:02 AM
Beautiful write Farie>>James
De La Keur Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Very sweet and romantic.....Love, Aleera
Rhinem Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 3:18 PM
"A Song of Love~Very Wonderful Faire!!!":):)~I have not noticed Yourself at soup before? So welcome if You are new!? And, judging from this heartful and wonderful write here~I would say keep on writing~and let "Your Light Shine Bright!!!":):)~"Love, Warmth & Blessings To 'You & Yours,' Always, John!!!":):) Bye Faire ~
Goff Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Faire, a masterful, poetic flight of imagination at the end! love this poem! and thanks for kind comments! Jim
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