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Until We Meet Again (Tanka)

Sweetly scented dreams Now, caste upon breath of wind Pleasant reminders of the blessed life we have shared My dear prince -- love has no bounds Tanka A Japanese poem of five lines, measured in units of 5-7-5-7-7 the first and third composed of five syllables and the others seven.

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Sue Mason

Date: 10/16/2008 4:31:00 PM

Great use of this form, Adell and all we have is the faith to hang on to that we will be reunited with those who have gone. Love indeed has no bounds but I sure wish somebody would get in touch from the other side once in awhile ... LOL ...

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/16/2008 11:32:00 AM

Oh such a tender, dreamy, loving write. Simply beautiful, eternal. Awesome Tanka. Love, Shar

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/16/2008 11:08:00 AM

This is so refreshing. I really like the images in this piece. This is appealing to the sense of smell and is vibrant. It's as soft as the evening wind upon the rosy cheeks of lovers. Great job! ~Joseph

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/16/2008 6:28:00 AM

Beautifully written and so tender. I really love it. Becoming a souper has opened my eyes to so many poetry forms, filling me with inspiration. I have read several Tankas today but none so wonderful as this. Nigel

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/16/2008 6:24:00 AM

Adell this Tanka is perfect - Very beautiful and priceless very uplifting and ending in so much truth - Love is something that is only held back by our own limitations - Loved this one Adell - God Bless

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/16/2008 6:19:00 AM

This is in perfect form and the flow is so smooth while theimagery is clear and real and simply beautiful. Michael