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Until the Drought of '88

Until the drought of '88
Euphonic sounds adorned his walls,
as he, his wife, and daughter ate
and laughter tripped through carefree halls.

His wife caressed the ivoried keys 
until the drought of '88,
their daughter sang with youthful ease;
each day a gift to celebrate.

That baby grand now bears the weight
of dust and silenced dreams once dreamed.
Until the drought of '88,
how strange such silence would have seemed.

Alas, a drunk behind the wheel
cut short his life at 28.
Unsullied joy was ours to feel 
until the drought of '88.


In fond memory of my cousin Brian, killed by a drunk driver.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 4:24 PM
wow, really great sonnet writing on this tragedy. Can't believe I ever missed this one. I thought it was an actual drought but it was metaphorical unless there was also a drought that year as well? Which would really give it impact too!! GREAT JOB Might as well fave this one too!
Watt Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Yes, metaphorical. It was for a Joseph May contest with that picture as a prompt. Thanks for the fav!
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 4:24 PM
and I just realized it was not even a sonnet. But had that great iambic meter
Watt Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:15 PM
Thanks, Andrea. This was my first attempt at a Quatern.
Devonshire Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 2:38 PM
John, I love the way you create the history of this piano. The man's daughter was singing as his wife was playing. You give this image so vividly to readers. Outstanding poetry! Congrats on your win.
Watt Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Always nice to hear from you, Carolyn. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment with such kindness. Warm regards ~ John
Gondolf Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 6:34 AM
A beautifully written sad poem, John. Congrats on your placement. John
Watt Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 2:55 AM
I appreciate the read and the kind words, John.
Somadas Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 6:06 AM
Great tribute and great win.. Congrats..
Watt Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 2:55 AM
Thank you very kindly, Jenish.
Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Heartwarming tribute, John. Congrats on your win.
Watt Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Thank you, Line. I always appreciate your kind words ~ John
May Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Beautiful tribute John, Congrats on your win
Watt Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Joseph, thank you kindly for hosting this contest and for the generous ranking. I shall look forward to your next contest. Cheers ~ John
Trifiatis Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 4:24 AM
An emotional thunderous tribute to a friend that left because of human indifference! Wonderful verses expressing nostalgia and grief dear, John.
Watt Avatar
January 31, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Thank you my friend. Is not our grief diffused just a bit when we can put it into words? I'm grateful for friends like you allowing me to do so ~ John
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